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^^Good Points^^
The only part I really found funny about this was when the guy's eyebrows went up as he said derka derka. That was kind of funny.
^^Needs Improving^^
Like your other movies, the drawings really aren't that good at all. Really, you should improve these quite a bit if you ever find the job. The storyline doesn't really make sense, this guy just shoots an Indian guy and then the lady asks if he is ok. Nothing else happens, the ending is really abrupt too. This feels like it should gon on slightly longer.