FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Greyscale]

K

^^Good Points^^
You did a good job setting a mood on this one. The gray colors really went well with the music, which was depressing and soft, like the feeling of gray. Interesting character as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seems a unfinished to me. If it was, the ending was really unsatisfying. I'm not sure the link between the robot and the stick figure.

[What's Cooking?]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, I didn't think it was really that terrible. The characters were neat, as they were pretty unique and had a personality to them. Storyline was pretty funny. I would like to see an extended version.

^^Needs Improving^^
Without any voice overs or sound effects, this really just feels distant to watch. Feels like I'm missing out on a part of the movie or something.

[Screwdriver Meets Himself]

K

^^Good Points^^
It started out to look interesting. The drawings were good. Granted, it didn't make much sense what was going on, but I would have still been entertained by it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The whole ending was kind of lame. Stuff like that with loud noises just doesn't appeal to me. I think you could have made something good out of this.

ScrewdriverClock responds:

Well of course,if I had spent more than 20 minutes on this it could of been great, but I didn't, because i made this what i wanted it to be. The point of this, like i said before is that two realities of oneself cannot meet, thus resulting in this.

[Hey There Big Boy!]

K

^^Good Points^^
It was actually kind of funny towards the end. It was unexpected that he tried to pierce his testicles, and the falling down at the end was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The voices sound like they are coming out of an old radio, so work on that. Also, could use some more zoomed in scenes, just to give this a more interesting look to it. Also, a preloader is always nice to have.

[Ur a Dumb Ass Charlie B]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was accurate for the movie. I guess you had a pretty low filesize as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was pretty poorly made. The animations were not realistic one bit, and the drawings weren't too on either. Definitely needs some some more to the graphical department. Also, the storyline wasn't that creative. We've all thought about this stuff before.

[Zelda Link To Past -Fixed]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, I liked the music. Backgrounds weren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was pretty poor. The animations were very slow, you definitely need to increase the framerate of your next movie by quite a bit. Also, work on some better form of displaying text, that just looks too childish. Storyline wasn't enticing at all. I was really bored by this mundane display.

[Infect truth...]

K

^^Good Points^^
It was rather funny. I was expecting this to be a serious movie, however it turned out after a while that you were just listing pretty random stuff, which was humorous. I liked the Brooke Shileds quote.

^^Needs Improving^^
No music or anything made this kind of boring, and there was nothing great graphically either. Some of the longer blocks were a bit quick to leave the screen.

[Audition... ep 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was kind of funny, though it wasn't anything really groundbreaking or original as far as the comedy went.

^^Needs Improving^^
White background was kind of lame to look at. You should have done some drawing in the background. Also, audio quality seemed really low quality. As I said, not really original as far as the jokes.