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[Screwdriver Meets Himself]

K

^^Good Points^^
It started out to look interesting. The drawings were good. Granted, it didn't make much sense what was going on, but I would have still been entertained by it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The whole ending was kind of lame. Stuff like that with loud noises just doesn't appeal to me. I think you could have made something good out of this.

ScrewdriverClock responds:

Well of course,if I had spent more than 20 minutes on this it could of been great, but I didn't, because i made this what i wanted it to be. The point of this, like i said before is that two realities of oneself cannot meet, thus resulting in this.

[Hey There Big Boy!]

K

^^Good Points^^
It was actually kind of funny towards the end. It was unexpected that he tried to pierce his testicles, and the falling down at the end was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The voices sound like they are coming out of an old radio, so work on that. Also, could use some more zoomed in scenes, just to give this a more interesting look to it. Also, a preloader is always nice to have.

[Ur a Dumb Ass Charlie B]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was accurate for the movie. I guess you had a pretty low filesize as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was pretty poorly made. The animations were not realistic one bit, and the drawings weren't too on either. Definitely needs some some more to the graphical department. Also, the storyline wasn't that creative. We've all thought about this stuff before.

[Zelda Link To Past -Fixed]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, I liked the music. Backgrounds weren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was pretty poor. The animations were very slow, you definitely need to increase the framerate of your next movie by quite a bit. Also, work on some better form of displaying text, that just looks too childish. Storyline wasn't enticing at all. I was really bored by this mundane display.

[Infect truth...]

K

^^Good Points^^
It was rather funny. I was expecting this to be a serious movie, however it turned out after a while that you were just listing pretty random stuff, which was humorous. I liked the Brooke Shileds quote.

^^Needs Improving^^
No music or anything made this kind of boring, and there was nothing great graphically either. Some of the longer blocks were a bit quick to leave the screen.

[Audition... ep 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was kind of funny, though it wasn't anything really groundbreaking or original as far as the comedy went.

^^Needs Improving^^
White background was kind of lame to look at. You should have done some drawing in the background. Also, audio quality seemed really low quality. As I said, not really original as far as the jokes.

[Peanut Butter Jelly Mario]

K

^^Good Points^^
Some decent animations that went with the lyrics kind of well. You changed things up which was kind of cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seemed a bit uninspired to me. Just Mario dancing, which wasn't really all that interesting to me. Though I guess nothing with this god-awful song could be that great. Also, rotating the camera was just annoying.

[Axe vs Line]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty smooth. Some cool FBF action and nice coloring of the different items throughout. Nice sound effects as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lack of storyline really hurt this. I just couldn't get interested in it just seeing a random ax fighting a line.

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ShortMonkey responds:

Thanks for the review! ^_^