FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Peanut Butter Jelly Mario]

K

^^Good Points^^
Some decent animations that went with the lyrics kind of well. You changed things up which was kind of cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seemed a bit uninspired to me. Just Mario dancing, which wasn't really all that interesting to me. Though I guess nothing with this god-awful song could be that great. Also, rotating the camera was just annoying.

[Axe vs Line]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty smooth. Some cool FBF action and nice coloring of the different items throughout. Nice sound effects as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lack of storyline really hurt this. I just couldn't get interested in it just seeing a random ax fighting a line.

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[GUM]

K

^^Good Points^^
That movie was really quite surprising. I wasn't expecting it to be more of a horror movie than it was. It was still very intriguing though, which made it fun to watch. An excellent show of drawings and animations, and even better sound effects throughout.

^^Needs Improving^^
That kids face and hands like turned red, it was freaky.

[Bush: Apocalypse Speech]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess I could say that this clearly displays your views about Bush, which I think is all you wanted to accomplish.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really the only part that took much effort was the voice over, which was terrible. For one thing, you gave a British accent, which Bush clearly does not have, and also the mic you have must be really cheap, as there was a ton of interference and static noises while you were talking.

[Insert Title Here]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good movie considering some of the stuff surrounding it at this score. You had pretty good graphics, with good animations of the faces. The best part had to be the end when orange exploded, that was unexpected.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline was really strange in this movie. I'm not sure what the heck BananaClock was trying to accomplish. Kill the clocks? Infiltrate the locks? Kind of confusing.

[Zelda's Missing]

K

^^Good Points^^
The whole K-mart sword thing was kind of humorous. I think this could have been decent had I been able to follow it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you have a shitload of white space around the actual movie, so you could have used that by either making the scenes bigger or the screen smaller. All that white space just makes you look silly. Also, the background kept moving and copying itself and then disappearing later. Aside from all that, the worst thing was that you didn't leave enough time for the text. I could only read half of what was going on, and therefore had a hard time staying interested in this.

[death ball]

K

^^Good Points^^
Wow. The music was at least high quality. Though I guess that's why this file was 3 mb and only twenty seconds long.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is beyond improving. If you really wanted to improve this movie, you should basically start over from scratch. The drawings looked like this was the first time you've used Flash, and the sound effects were annoying. To improve this file specifically, compress the music.

[Journey Is The Destinatio]

K

^^Good Points^^
It wasn't a bad animation at all. The animations were fairly good. You at least have some potential in my eyes. Battle without Honor or Humanity is always a cool song to use, and I liked the way you synced parts of the movie to the song.

^^Needs Improving^^
This didn't have a storyline at all. Just a guy walking down the street. I was hoping for a bit more.

[Phone sex]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I thought the way you made this a MGS type communication theme was kind of cool. Interesting to know that phone sex exists in other languages...

^^Needs Improving^^
It was a pretty boring movie. No animation other than the simple one that kept repeating itself. It got kind of boring after a while since it was in another language and it just wasn't that funny.

[a series of random morals]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty nice. The animations were pretty cool, as they all flowed together, instead of just creating new scenes out of nothing. Cool music and nice colors used.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't really sync anything to the music, which always impresses me when I see a FBF movie.