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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 149]

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^^Good Points^^
This is quite a transformation between the two pokemon. Honestly I'd rather face the first form than the second one. This guy looks retarded or something. Not to mention quite fat as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Maybe you could start doing something other than japanese music? Something I could associate with the pokemon.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

I use non-Japanese music a lot. ;)

[Socialist World Republic]

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^^Good Points^^
Well I'm not communist or anything like that, but this movie was pretty awesome! I can see how people can be drawn into it if propeganda is this good. You animated very well and the music was very powerful and compelling. I think it's a great show of your talent as an animator.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you pretty much covered everything. Subtitles, good animations. Nothing wrong that I can see!

Kenzu responds:

Thank you for your review milinko!

[Capture The Flag: Ep 2]

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^^Good Points^^
Great stuff! Can't believe I have never heard of this series before. You've got a very good storyline in this one and very good voice actors as well. I definitely think they make a lot of what this movie is. Also, there are the surprisingly detailed drawings that you have in every part of this movie. Quite impressive!

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I would say to improve would be animations. They are good, but walking and some movement still looks a little awkward and unnatural.

[NG Welcome 2008]

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^^Good Points^^
A nice little celebration of the new year. It was pretty short, but that was good, since it didn't really have much to it. The graphics were pretty fair. Animations were smooth and you did a nice job on the drawings as well. Definitely pretty good for your first flash submission.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, not much to it. I thought maybe you could have done some voice overs for these guys to say something funny or whatever.

aldlv responds:

I will try the voice...
and... thanx... means a lot... that you like my first submission
=D... I'm really glad

[Handbook]

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^^Good Points^^
The graphics were impressive. The drawings were good, and so were the animations. I thought you did a swell job on the lip syncing too. The ending to this was kind of funny. Also, nice and short.

^^Needs Improving^^
I watched it twice, because I thought I was missing something, but it appears as if I wasn't. Not really a great joke, but still comical enough.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 145]

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^^Good Points^^
Zapdos, one pokemon that I actually recognize in this series. Not a bad job on this episode either. You have the lightning in the background, which looks cool and is also relevant to the Pokemon. I also liked Hitler's long beak. It looked great.

^^Needs Improving^^
Definitely not liking the wings the way they are though. Zapdos's wings really don't look much like what you have. I realize you are using images to make Hitler's features, but maybe you could try to draw something to make this look better.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 146]

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^^Good Points^^
Wow, this one definitely looks quite different from other episodes. Hitler definitely stands out quite a bit with his huge wings. The background was appropriate of course, seeing how this is a fire pokemon. I liked the music as well. This Japanese music is quite fun to listen to.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you did a bit too much of Hitler's dressing up. Could have made his wings smaller I think. I think the Pokemon was way too small. I was first wondering "Hey where is the Pokemon?" when I first glanced at this.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

That;s the size of the artwork unfortunately.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 147]

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^^Good Points^^
Cute little guy here. His glassy eyes give him the look of a little baby pokemon. You did a nice job on Hitler, though I think his ears should be upward a little more. Also, a good choice of scenery for this water pokemon.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music doesn't really seem to go that well with this Pokemon. I think he's more gentle than the music is.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Dragon Pokémon and the song has dragon in the title.