FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Morbid Bastard]

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^^Good Points^^
Well this was surprising. Wasn't expecting the guy to hang himself. Before that was pretty funny though. Old people are always kind of funny. Graphics were pretty good, and the file size was small too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The bleeping while the old man was talking was really annoying though. I don't understand why you even put them in, considering you can still hear what he is saying very clearly.

[Grahem And The Poo]

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^^Good Points^^
Definitely an interesting story...perhaps something you experienced in your own life? I liked your animations of Grahem, they were nice, and the music was pretty cool too. I especially like how it's always going on and off throughout the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't see why you didn't add more color to this. The whole background is white, which is kind of boring to me.

[Ackbar : The Trailer]

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^^Good Points^^
I already saw the movie, but I still think the preloader itself is pretty fun to watch. You've got Samuel L. Jackson in here, which is funny. I love the many different things that happen when the Trap button is hit. Always something different.

^^Needs improving^^
Doesn't really show much about the movie itself. I really have no idea what is going to happen in the movie.

[Ackbar : Directors Cut]

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^^Good Points^^
A great song added to this episode. Love the scatman song. That was rather unexpected too. I didn't know the Trap Button had that type of power to make the scatman appear.

^^Needs Improving^^
Why was ackbar a vehical from Star Wars this time? And who was that guy sitting in the chair. These changes don't really make sense to me.

[Ackbar : Fired]

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^^Good Points^^
Another pretty good Ackbar episode. I like how you are able to introduce pretty much every character in the series so far in this episode. Kind of cool to see them all back again.

^^Needs Improving^^
Why didn't he fire that guy that always sits at the table? That would have made sense to me.

[{2007} An Experiment...]

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^^Good Points^^
Kind of cool to see the drawings progress in here. Definitely not as good as the other one of these you did. Though I did like the NG tank drawing, that was cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, this one is not nearly as good as the other experimental movie you made like this one. The drawings in this one are less interesting and are more free-hand, which doesn't really look good to me.

[{2007} another experiment]

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^^Good Points^^
I could never have the patience to sit on my computer and draw these things out step by step. You must have a lot of patience. The stuff you drew looked really good for the most part, and I thought it was fun trying to guess what you were drawing before they were done.

^^Needs improving^^
It would have been cool if you did the same process with coloring them in. I think that would have looked pretty cool as well.

[{2006} violence ep.1]

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^^Good Points^^
Looks like a random show of violence and FBF skills. I think you've got some good skills when it comes to animating sticks and violence. Everything was pretty smooth.

^^Needs Improving^^
First, could use some sound. Violence is much more interesting when there is a good set of sound effects to go with it. Also, you've got a big screen, yet you only use about a quarter of it for the movie. You should definitely zoom in a bit and use the entire screen.

[Ackbar : Clock Day]

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^^Good Points^^
Haha, nothing wrong with a little bit of anti-clock if you've got it. You at least made it funny in the way you presented it. I don't really understand why Ackbar would be against having a party. He seems like the kind of guy that would be interesting in having a Clock Day party.

^^Needs Improving^^
Very short. I definitely think you could have made something longer for Clock Day. It's a glorious day!

[Ackbar : Extended]

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^^Good Points^^
Not as good as the last episode I watched but it's still got that random humor in it. I was really expecting a full episode, then realized it was a trap though.

^^Needs Improving^^
The trap thing went on for a bit too long I think. I watched it for a while, then went to do something else and missed the joke at the end.