FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ackbar : The Trailer]

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^^Good Points^^
I already saw the movie, but I still think the preloader itself is pretty fun to watch. You've got Samuel L. Jackson in here, which is funny. I love the many different things that happen when the Trap button is hit. Always something different.

^^Needs improving^^
Doesn't really show much about the movie itself. I really have no idea what is going to happen in the movie.

[Ackbar : Directors Cut]

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^^Good Points^^
A great song added to this episode. Love the scatman song. That was rather unexpected too. I didn't know the Trap Button had that type of power to make the scatman appear.

^^Needs Improving^^
Why was ackbar a vehical from Star Wars this time? And who was that guy sitting in the chair. These changes don't really make sense to me.

[Ackbar : Fired]

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^^Good Points^^
Another pretty good Ackbar episode. I like how you are able to introduce pretty much every character in the series so far in this episode. Kind of cool to see them all back again.

^^Needs Improving^^
Why didn't he fire that guy that always sits at the table? That would have made sense to me.

[{2007} An Experiment...]

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^^Good Points^^
Kind of cool to see the drawings progress in here. Definitely not as good as the other one of these you did. Though I did like the NG tank drawing, that was cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, this one is not nearly as good as the other experimental movie you made like this one. The drawings in this one are less interesting and are more free-hand, which doesn't really look good to me.

[{2007} another experiment]

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^^Good Points^^
I could never have the patience to sit on my computer and draw these things out step by step. You must have a lot of patience. The stuff you drew looked really good for the most part, and I thought it was fun trying to guess what you were drawing before they were done.

^^Needs improving^^
It would have been cool if you did the same process with coloring them in. I think that would have looked pretty cool as well.

[{2006} violence ep.1]

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^^Good Points^^
Looks like a random show of violence and FBF skills. I think you've got some good skills when it comes to animating sticks and violence. Everything was pretty smooth.

^^Needs Improving^^
First, could use some sound. Violence is much more interesting when there is a good set of sound effects to go with it. Also, you've got a big screen, yet you only use about a quarter of it for the movie. You should definitely zoom in a bit and use the entire screen.

[Ackbar : Clock Day]

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^^Good Points^^
Haha, nothing wrong with a little bit of anti-clock if you've got it. You at least made it funny in the way you presented it. I don't really understand why Ackbar would be against having a party. He seems like the kind of guy that would be interesting in having a Clock Day party.

^^Needs Improving^^
Very short. I definitely think you could have made something longer for Clock Day. It's a glorious day!

[Ackbar : Extended]

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^^Good Points^^
Not as good as the last episode I watched but it's still got that random humor in it. I was really expecting a full episode, then realized it was a trap though.

^^Needs Improving^^
The trap thing went on for a bit too long I think. I watched it for a while, then went to do something else and missed the joke at the end.

[Ackbar : Pirate]

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^^Good Points^^
I haven't watched many of these, but this one makes me more optimistic for the rest of the series. I like your sense of humor. You've got laser turtle in there, which was a neat idea, and pretty much everything that was said was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your voice overs seem a little bit forced if you know what I mean. They seemed to be very unnatural for you to do them.

[Ackbar : Deal]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, no idea what is really going on here, but it was enjoyable to watch. I like the characters. The acting was pretty good and the voice acting was pretty good as well. The ending was rather unexpected though.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seemed rather random to me. A little bit on the boring side of random though.