FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hertog Jan 15]

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^^Good Points^^
A movie in the best fashion. Random and with clocks. It's got the basic storyline...SBC is kidnapped, and two characters go on a journey to find him. You did a great job making the journey part look really trippy. I liked it quite a bit.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing was the voice overs. There weren't too many of them, but they were hard to hear, especially with the rising volume of the music.

[Shared joy is double joy]

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^^Good Points^^
For a thirty second movie, they don't get much better than this. First off, the scene of a guy ripping off his boob and giving it to another man is walking a line between insane and good humor, and maybe I'm insane, but I found it funny. The graphics were great. Very nice FBF animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just the fact that it is short. Maybe you could do something random like this that is a little longer.

[Hamster Blade]

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^^Good Points^^
I found the secret in the top right corner. It was...interesting I suppose. A neat image. Definitely the high point of this submission.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well I suppose if you want to make what you did better, you can try to make the audio loop a little smoother. It's quite obvious when the song starts and ends, which kind of takes away from the point of a loop.

[Cable Car Craze]

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^^Good Points^^
I never knew there was a craze for cable cars. I guess it's a New Zealand thing. Still wasn't bad though. I like the characters and the graphics are pretty ahead of their times. Looked very nice. Sequence of events here wasn't bad, and the ending, with the lady freezing was funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could stand to be longer. Maybe some voice overs would make it better as well.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 018]

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^^Good Points^^
Not much of a change in this Pokemon's evolution. You still managed to change Hitler enough to keep it fresh though. A new set of wings, and some interesting coloring in the head as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Same background as before once again. Maybe just a picture of a sky would be cool, seeing how this is a flying Pokemon.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 016]

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^^Good Points^^
Looks like a chicken or something to me, but whatever he is, he was a good base for Hitler's dress. I really like how the whole face is changed in this one. Fully colored and a nose added as well. The wings were very well done too. Another great episode!

^^Needs Improving^^
I like your Japanese music, but there are plenty of songs about flying and what not. I thought that would have been good to use in this episode. Maybe in the next two evolutions it will happen.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 015]

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^^Good Points^^
Woah! This is quite a transformation from some lame caterpillar, to a defenseless cocoon, to some badass looking bee thing. You definitely did a much better job on Hitler than yesterdays. He's got the spiky hands, large wings, and those evil looking red eyes. Great job on this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
It has been the same background for this Pokemon and some of the others. Needs a new background soon.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Kakuna is lame looking.