FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ackbar : Pirate]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I haven't watched many of these, but this one makes me more optimistic for the rest of the series. I like your sense of humor. You've got laser turtle in there, which was a neat idea, and pretty much everything that was said was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your voice overs seem a little bit forced if you know what I mean. They seemed to be very unnatural for you to do them.

[Ackbar : Deal]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well, no idea what is really going on here, but it was enjoyable to watch. I like the characters. The acting was pretty good and the voice acting was pretty good as well. The ending was rather unexpected though.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seemed rather random to me. A little bit on the boring side of random though.

[Hertog Jan 15]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A movie in the best fashion. Random and with clocks. It's got the basic storyline...SBC is kidnapped, and two characters go on a journey to find him. You did a great job making the journey part look really trippy. I liked it quite a bit.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing was the voice overs. There weren't too many of them, but they were hard to hear, especially with the rising volume of the music.

[Shared joy is double joy]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
For a thirty second movie, they don't get much better than this. First off, the scene of a guy ripping off his boob and giving it to another man is walking a line between insane and good humor, and maybe I'm insane, but I found it funny. The graphics were great. Very nice FBF animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just the fact that it is short. Maybe you could do something random like this that is a little longer.

[Hamster Blade]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I found the secret in the top right corner. It was...interesting I suppose. A neat image. Definitely the high point of this submission.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well I suppose if you want to make what you did better, you can try to make the audio loop a little smoother. It's quite obvious when the song starts and ends, which kind of takes away from the point of a loop.

[Cable Car Craze]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I never knew there was a craze for cable cars. I guess it's a New Zealand thing. Still wasn't bad though. I like the characters and the graphics are pretty ahead of their times. Looked very nice. Sequence of events here wasn't bad, and the ending, with the lady freezing was funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could stand to be longer. Maybe some voice overs would make it better as well.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 018]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Not much of a change in this Pokemon's evolution. You still managed to change Hitler enough to keep it fresh though. A new set of wings, and some interesting coloring in the head as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Same background as before once again. Maybe just a picture of a sky would be cool, seeing how this is a flying Pokemon.