FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hertog Jan 12]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well what you added on to the end of this was mildly entertaining. It's always interesting to see what comes out of a Clock's head.

^^Needs Improving^^
90% of this is just the same thing that you submitted a few days ago. It's really unfortunate when a series does this, as it really starts to lose its interest and become quite boring. Hopefully the next episode will have something fresh.

[SBC'S PS3]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Honestly not as bad as I had expected, considering you spent only 10 minutes on it as you say. I guess the storyline was alright, but I think the Speakonia really made this interesting. You had it almost as one constant sentence, and even did your sound effects with Speakonia, which was funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations could have used a little bit of work I think. Also, try making a longer one with a better ending.

[Weapon Fight]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Another talented stick artist submitting another random fight scene. Really nothing too innovative in this one, but I did like how you went in slow motion in parts and sped things up. Definitely top notch animations. Great job here, man!

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, just a random fight scene. I would really like to see something with more storyline. At least a random fight in which we are introduced to the characters fighting a bit more.

SeKret responds:

Thanks for ur synopsis.
But as designed and as stated, it's a short. There isnt supposed to be a storyline.
Thus and therefore, not needing improvation.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 140]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Haha, a funny episode for sure. Looks like Hitler got caught in a taco or something! Anyway, this is a pretty silly looking Pokemon, and the silly music with all the weird sound effects went well with this guy, I think. Also, a great filesize. Probably one of the lowest of the series!

^^Needs Improving^^
Shouldn't Hitler have some type of SCUBA device or something? He is under water you know.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Hitler can breathe underwater. This was first made known to the public when he discovered the lost city of Atlantis whilst travelling around the world in 80 days.

[One Must Fall]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Definitely a different movie than what I've seen from you thus far. It had an interesting storyline and interesting graphics as well. The camera changes were good throughout. I liked this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
One thing you need to work on is graphical depth, especially when you are working with this traced style. Sometimes things looked a little short when they were on angles and such.

[Bandits!]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
An interesting style you have. Were the graphics scanned in from a piece of paper? It's kind of hard to tell. Nonetheless, they look rather unique.

^^Needs Improving^^
Storyline didn't make much sense to me. It doesn't sound like English is your first language, which would attribute to it being kind of hard to understand. I would get someone on the forums to proofread your next submission. Also, strange ending...are you planning on a sequel?

[The Dawn Of Man]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I like this movie. You are a pretty good artist. Your style of animation is simple, yet still better than most people are capable of, and gets the job done in terms of storyline. I like how you jump from era to era in this one. Each era had its humor. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I didn't like, and this is minor, was the gun sound effect, which sounded quite grainy and not much like a pistol at all to me.

[Morbid Bastard]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well this was surprising. Wasn't expecting the guy to hang himself. Before that was pretty funny though. Old people are always kind of funny. Graphics were pretty good, and the file size was small too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The bleeping while the old man was talking was really annoying though. I don't understand why you even put them in, considering you can still hear what he is saying very clearly.

[Grahem And The Poo]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Definitely an interesting story...perhaps something you experienced in your own life? I liked your animations of Grahem, they were nice, and the music was pretty cool too. I especially like how it's always going on and off throughout the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't see why you didn't add more color to this. The whole background is white, which is kind of boring to me.