FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bluedrink]

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^^Good Points^^
This was an funny little short. The artwork was pretty good. Nice drawings with good shape to them. The animations were quite smooth as well. I also like the audio.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...Never really found this problem with vending machines...lol. Anyway, kind of short.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 141]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well this is quite a drastic change for this Pokemon, and a drastic change for Hitler as well. I like his sharp arms and the shape of his head as well. Another great episode in your series. Well done!!

^^Needs Improving^^
This pokemon lives underwater? Seems like an odd place for him. Also, Hitler's arms could use some shading or texture.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Not really when you consider it's based on a trilobite and is part water type.

[Hertog Jan 12]

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^^Good Points^^
Well what you added on to the end of this was mildly entertaining. It's always interesting to see what comes out of a Clock's head.

^^Needs Improving^^
90% of this is just the same thing that you submitted a few days ago. It's really unfortunate when a series does this, as it really starts to lose its interest and become quite boring. Hopefully the next episode will have something fresh.

[SBC'S PS3]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Honestly not as bad as I had expected, considering you spent only 10 minutes on it as you say. I guess the storyline was alright, but I think the Speakonia really made this interesting. You had it almost as one constant sentence, and even did your sound effects with Speakonia, which was funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations could have used a little bit of work I think. Also, try making a longer one with a better ending.

[Weapon Fight]

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^^Good Points^^
Another talented stick artist submitting another random fight scene. Really nothing too innovative in this one, but I did like how you went in slow motion in parts and sped things up. Definitely top notch animations. Great job here, man!

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, just a random fight scene. I would really like to see something with more storyline. At least a random fight in which we are introduced to the characters fighting a bit more.

SeKret responds:

Thanks for ur synopsis.
But as designed and as stated, it's a short. There isnt supposed to be a storyline.
Thus and therefore, not needing improvation.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 140]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Haha, a funny episode for sure. Looks like Hitler got caught in a taco or something! Anyway, this is a pretty silly looking Pokemon, and the silly music with all the weird sound effects went well with this guy, I think. Also, a great filesize. Probably one of the lowest of the series!

^^Needs Improving^^
Shouldn't Hitler have some type of SCUBA device or something? He is under water you know.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Hitler can breathe underwater. This was first made known to the public when he discovered the lost city of Atlantis whilst travelling around the world in 80 days.

[One Must Fall]

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^^Good Points^^
Definitely a different movie than what I've seen from you thus far. It had an interesting storyline and interesting graphics as well. The camera changes were good throughout. I liked this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
One thing you need to work on is graphical depth, especially when you are working with this traced style. Sometimes things looked a little short when they were on angles and such.

[Bandits!]

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^^Good Points^^
An interesting style you have. Were the graphics scanned in from a piece of paper? It's kind of hard to tell. Nonetheless, they look rather unique.

^^Needs Improving^^
Storyline didn't make much sense to me. It doesn't sound like English is your first language, which would attribute to it being kind of hard to understand. I would get someone on the forums to proofread your next submission. Also, strange ending...are you planning on a sequel?

[The Dawn Of Man]

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^^Good Points^^
I like this movie. You are a pretty good artist. Your style of animation is simple, yet still better than most people are capable of, and gets the job done in terms of storyline. I like how you jump from era to era in this one. Each era had its humor. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I didn't like, and this is minor, was the gun sound effect, which sounded quite grainy and not much like a pistol at all to me.