FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Textual Adventures III]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, if you look beyond the graphics, it has pretty much what every movie on NG has. Decent humor and an odd storyline, but still kind of interesting. The ending was kind of weird, but random and funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
There was no audio in the actual movie. If you don't have much graphical capability with this program you use, at least put in some good sound effects and music.

Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Luigi the janitor]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, I did laugh at the end when Luigi shot himself. I guess it looked kind of funny the way he just fell over instantly.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, you've got a lot of empty room around the edges, which are just filled with black space. No need for this, use the entire screen. The animations weren't great, and you could have worked on the sound sync a little more with the gunshots. They were visibly off.

[Knuxrouge's Newgrounds]

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^^Good Points^^
A decent movie. I think you got a good amount of humor added into this with some good commentary by the characters from Sonic. I thought it was pretty interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphically this is pretty boring. You have the same looping animations over and over in the characters. Also, the framerate isn't high enough to make the animations very smooth. Definitely needs smoother animation.

knuxrouge responds:

I warned you in the note about the animation. It was at a minimum. The flash lags a bit, I chose not to fix it, becasue if I did, then the text will go by faster = more bad words.
Thanks for your review.

[2008| Meet the Pyro]

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^^Good Points^^
Ahh I love TF2...glad I caught this one. Can't say I really enjoy playing as the pyro or playing against one, but this movie was great, no doubt. I really enjoy how you made a character with a personality for the Pryo. I think you did a great job of voice acting and making him sound crazy. I loved his stories and how he became who he is. The fight scene is awesome too. Great movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, there is nothing to say, except make some more!

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 142]

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^^Good Points^^
Another episode, another Pokemon. This one was pretty interesting. You dressed up Hitler quite a bit, with the purple wings and pointy tail. Definitely a superb job on Hitler in that aspect. I liked the music. That Japanese stuff is always great to hear.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not the background I would have chose, but I guess that's your thing, eh?

[Bluedrink]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This was an funny little short. The artwork was pretty good. Nice drawings with good shape to them. The animations were quite smooth as well. I also like the audio.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...Never really found this problem with vending machines...lol. Anyway, kind of short.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 141]

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^^Good Points^^
Well this is quite a drastic change for this Pokemon, and a drastic change for Hitler as well. I like his sharp arms and the shape of his head as well. Another great episode in your series. Well done!!

^^Needs Improving^^
This pokemon lives underwater? Seems like an odd place for him. Also, Hitler's arms could use some shading or texture.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Not really when you consider it's based on a trilobite and is part water type.