FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[magneticroboticmetalgrey]

K

^^Good Points^^
Atleast you used some shading in this, which is a good thing. Atleast you put some detail into the drawings.

^^Needs Improving^^
This isn't really entertaining at all. It doesn't showcase a storyline or really any sequence of events, rather just a no-name clock who changes color and changes his face. Not very fun to watch or entertaining. Needs some sound too atleast.

[Sock Throw]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, just about everything in this movie is well done! I thought your drawing style was quite unique, I loved the way you drew you "unsuspecting opponent" and the animations were just as random, yet that just made this so much funnier. I really laughed at this and watched it three times before I became bored with it! Would love to see more work from you. Definitely deserves a higher score than it has now.

^^Needs Improving^^
Either make a longer version or make some other movie, because this is a great one!

[Fuzzy the Caterpillar]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like the character. He doesn't look like much, but he's got some personality or something. The music was unique, which is always a positive thing.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, he sat on a branch for quite a while, which was pretty disappointing. You really shoudl have added some type of storyline or events that happen to the caterpillar dude. This could have been a lot better had it not just been a few frames with music.

[Kung-foo - no music]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the sound effects, they weren't just overused action noises taken from Flashkit. There was scattered humor in this, but I'm not sure if this was supposed to be funny o.o

^^Needs Improving^^
To sum this up, I'd have to say that this movie was just more confusing than anything. It's hard to tell what is going on since your animations move quickly, and there isn't much difference from character to character. You could also work on more FBF animation to make things smoother and more realistic.

[Fat kid farts]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the sound was clear atleast. I got a small bit of entertainment from the "Oh no!" that sounded off.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, I get the first part, a fat kid farts pretty loudly, but what happens after that is a mystery to me. Perhaps you could animated this with a little more clarity to help me understand. Does the guy kill the fat kid and then fall into a red hole or something? I really ahve no idea what this is about.