FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fuzzy the Caterpillar]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like the character. He doesn't look like much, but he's got some personality or something. The music was unique, which is always a positive thing.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, he sat on a branch for quite a while, which was pretty disappointing. You really shoudl have added some type of storyline or events that happen to the caterpillar dude. This could have been a lot better had it not just been a few frames with music.

[Kung-foo - no music]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the sound effects, they weren't just overused action noises taken from Flashkit. There was scattered humor in this, but I'm not sure if this was supposed to be funny o.o

^^Needs Improving^^
To sum this up, I'd have to say that this movie was just more confusing than anything. It's hard to tell what is going on since your animations move quickly, and there isn't much difference from character to character. You could also work on more FBF animation to make things smoother and more realistic.

[Fat kid farts]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the sound was clear atleast. I got a small bit of entertainment from the "Oh no!" that sounded off.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, I get the first part, a fat kid farts pretty loudly, but what happens after that is a mystery to me. Perhaps you could animated this with a little more clarity to help me understand. Does the guy kill the fat kid and then fall into a red hole or something? I really ahve no idea what this is about.

[J-ass SkateBoarding NEW]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was good, as just about every previous reviewer has already pointed out.

^^Needs Improving^^
Somehow this just isn't as entertaining as the real show. You didn't animate very well and your animations were only large scale and were very slow. Physics weren't good because of the slow animations and your skateboards just hovered over the ground. There were no sound effects, and I really think sound effects are imperitive in a movie such as this.

[Striped #1]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very good collection of FBF work from two artists! I have to say that both authors did a very nice job on their own part. Each part was synced well with the music, which was a treat as well! Everything was animated smoothly and there was a lot going on in both parts. I have to say I liked galactic cores part better though.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmmm...I always like to see a menu button during each scene, just in case, but it wasn't a problem since both parts were pretty entertaining.

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