FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[F13 short film]

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^^Good Points^^
Good for a short movie. Had decent art and animations. The sound effects really made it cool though. Great job on the whole killing scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
You just need to work on arm/leg animations. They were a little sketchy to me.

[Group X - Schfifty Five]

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^^Good Points^^
It was mildly funny. Though I didn't really laugh at it much, I could see the humor.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, not really my cup of tea when it comes to humor. There also wasn't any graphics to back it up, so that's pretty much all you were riding on. Just didn't do it for me.

[Too Twisted Intro]

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^^Good Points^^
A pretty interesting intro you have here. The graphics were pretty impressive, with a lot of detail and cool lighting effects. Pretty good for what it is supposed to be.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only real complaint I have about this is that the voice overs were pretty hard to hear in the beginning. I'm sure it wouldn't make a difference though, as I don't feel it took much away from viewing this.

[Clock Spirit 2007]

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^^Good Points^^
Quite an interesting submission you have here. You got it right when it wasn't the average Clock Day submission, and I liked that fact. It had some funny dialogue and some funny characters. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could have been a little longer. Quite short in my opinion.

pixelz responds:

I made it on Clock Day, I don't really care about the clocks, but I just like participating in Clock day. I thought it was short too, but couldn't figure out what to do after that.
Thanks for the review and head over to toastarcade.wordpress.com!

[House of Clocks]

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^^Good Points^^
Ok, I like the idea of a murder mystery type movie. Speakonia work wasn't bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the graphics were terrible. You didn't even cut out strawberry clock, don't know why you didn't draw your own if that isn't possible. Also, everything looks blurry and low quality. Also, this ended really abruptly. Should have finished it!

Frenzy responds:

Yeah, I knew it ended kind of abruptly, sorry about that. Happy Clock Day!