FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clock Potter]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, I at least had good thoughts coming into this from the soundboard.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really atrocious...where to start. First off, I don't understand why you left a gray box around SBC? I guess it's the limited capabilities of your Flash program, but in that case, you should have drawn him...not like it's that complicated. The whole scene where Voldemort shows up really turned me off. Especially since it lasted twenty seconds. The storyline was hard to follow...I had no idea that SBC died, and you just tried to lace this with a bunch of crappy, random Napoleon Dynamite humor, which did this no glroy.

[lice vs crabs trailer!]

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^^Good Points^^
Heh, the idea of lice and crabs having a battle on my body is just hilarious. Just the idea makes this movie worth watching. Too bad it isn't going to be a full movie :( The epic music made this more funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sound effects seemed a bit low quality in this, especially some of the louder ones.

[Super Clock Dance Party!]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, I liked the music, and the background wasn't too bad. Actually looked kind of nice. A decent effort here.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess there are a lot worse on Clock Day, but I've seen dance party done so many times before. In fact, I almost did it last year ;) Regardless, you could have maybe added a few more clocks here. Just Rupee and SBC doesn't make such a hot party.

Imacow responds:

Thanks, I could of added more clocks. But Rupee and SBC were the only clocks I had already drew. Apparently im to lazy to draw clocks.

[Clock Crew Uprising]

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^^Good Points^^
An awesome clock day movie. I'm pretty sure it would have scored pretty well even if it weren't clock day. The graphics were very well done, especially the real people. Their descriptions were funny like "Is definitely me". Loved the idea of this, and the many "fillers" made me laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not much, hope to see the next episode soon!

[Strawberry goes Shopping]

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^^Good Points^^
Heh, a great movie for Clock Day, definitely one of your best that I can remember. You had lots of cool graphical things in this, mostly in the scene where SBC was chasing the bus. Cool job there. A good amount of humor laced throughout this too. Happy Clock Day!

^^Needs Improving^^
Just work on your looping backgrounds a bit, it's very obvious when they start over.

Imacow responds:

Thanks for the review.

Yea I think the bus chasing scene was the best scene.

I noticed that I did a pretty crappy job of looping in this, thats something I need to work on.