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[Ware House Fight Part 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, I guess the drawings are the best part in this movie. I have no idea why you enlarged all the guns at the end. When I saw that it really lowered my confidence in your drawing skills.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not a very original idea...sticks fighting in a warehouse. The death scenes aren't particularly exciting or unpredictable. The sound effects are lack luster and the animations are pretty lame as well. Sorry, but I just didn't like this too much.

[Finding Neo]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not abad idea to make a spoof from Finding Nemo and using Neo as the main character. That's pretty creative. The sound effects were also well placed and sounded good.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't really develop a great storyline and I don't really see what this has to do with actually "finding" Neo at all. He just flies away after some gun shots. There is also the fact that your drawings are rather primitive and Neo doesn't quite look like the Keanu I know.

[Chasing Pigeons]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were well done. You drew the background out pretty nicely and I also like the character designs. Taking the words from the previous reviewer "I liked the potato man!". I thought the voice overs were pretty well done, and this was pretty humorous and entertaining. I wasn't expecting that ending.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, this is kind of short. Try making a longer movie I think you would do a good job.

Psybola responds:

Thanks for the wonderful critique! My next short will definitely be longer. Thanks again for your comments!

[Mega Man vs. Quick Man]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this movie is definitely the graphics. You took a lot of time to draw everything out in this movie and you did a great job. This looks just like Megaman and everything has a lot of detail in it. The camera angles were constantly changing, which I liked and this was filled with action. Great job on making the fight scenes, they were great!

^^Needs Improving^^
I would have liked to see more of a storyline developed in the beginning. Maybe it is explained in the game, but I've never gotten too into Megaman..

[A Decline Christmas]

K

^^Good Points^^
Somehow I've been on NG for over a year and this movie slipped my grasp and today was the first time I've actually watched it. Boy have I been missing out on a lot. Just about everything in this movie is great. The drawings are excellent and have lots of detail. The animations are also very smooth and there are lots of subtle animations to make this even better. The stoyrline is extremely funny and very entertaining. I really enjoyed watching this movie. I especially like the author comments you can activate throughout the movie, they are really quite interesting to read.

^^Needs Improving^^
I felt this could have been longer, but as it is, this movie is pretty darn perfect.

[The Bard's Song]

K

^^Good Points^^
I have to say that Blind Guarding is a great band...too bad more people don't make music videos to their music. They could turn out great. Your movie is a pretty good one. I loved you you made a great storyline to go with this song, it is really quite interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you didn't really animate a whole lot. Most of this was still frames with very subtle animations and nothing really too impressive. That is my main complaint.

[Batman (Animutated)]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another neat animutation by you. This one had lots of funny parts in it, like "you are my servant now!". Stuff like that just made me laugh. I like how you tried to keep this one more on track and make somewhat of a storyline out of it. Not a bad idea.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like this one as much as your others because the music is really too calm and animutation movies have to have some kind of funky music in order to be great.

[Wizard Power]

K

^^Good Points^^
No doubt one of the best animutation movies I've seen. I can see why it is number one on Animutationportal. This had lots of random stuff in it, which is good, but you still show that you have a lot of flash skills with all the effects you put in and photo editing skills...everything looks really nice in this. I laughed at this a good amount, especially seeing gandalf in a bunny suit. That's great.

^^Needs Improving^^
I usually like to see music with more lyrics, so the author can interpret them, but this isn't bad, you did that a little bit.

[Dailytoon #228]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the drawings in Ying-Yong's section of this daily toon. They were pretty unique and he has an interesting methos of shading. I also liked the sound in both parts, especially mindless self indulgence.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really an epic daily toon. Adam Ant's part is really quite lame, since it's just an image or two shown on a screen with dancing gost and star. I didn't really like Ying-Yong's part either because it doesn't make much sense.