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[Fjernsyn]

K

^^Good Points^^
The artistic skill you have is obvious. You have a very realistic style of drawing and coloring, especially with the animations of people and also shading. Parts of this were pretty funny, though for the most part I was bored.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I just said, it was a little boring. I'm a bit disappointed that it's mostly just random scenes that are unrelated. The scenes were also very long, which I don't think works well with a bunch of random scenes.

Comlock responds:

Thanks=)
I'll keep that crit in mind for later toons.

(and yes, it's random. I warned people about it in the "Author's comments" ^_^)

[Vote: Dir cut]

K

^^Good Points^^
You've definitely got some decent animation skills. I looked at some of the animations and they were very detailed and realistic. Some interesting drawings as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This just didn't flow well. I don't like how you kept putting "ends" to this and then just continuing on some more. It got kind of annoying, and eventually I just stopped watching.

[Misheard lyrics of song..]

K

^^Good Points^^
Decent song at least. A good tune to listen to.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't make much sense to me. Usually when people make something like this, it's made using a song that has lyrics that are hard to hear. This song was very clear throughout, and your changed words just didn't make sense, or didn't really even sound right. You didn't even change half of the words. Ok idea, but needs a better song to go with it.

[Weird Al's Best]

K

^^Good Points^^
One of my favorite songs by Al, and another good music video to go with it. I think the thing you did best was capture the guy's almost insane excitement over this store, with the bloody parts of this. Made me laugh. Good job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Too many words. Should have done as little of that as you can.

[Splash Attack]

K

^^Good Points^^
Great fun! It's really neat how you made this loop random scenes, and they actually seemed to go nicely together in any combination. I think no matter how long I watch it I will still be entertained. I loved the voice overs. Very funny movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I would like to be able to actually see all of the scenes in a menu as well. I'm not sure at all if I've seen them all :(

[FF: Battle for Newgrounds]

K

^^Good Points^^
I actually liked the music, unlike whoever decided to yell "shut off that music", which kind of ruined it. Seems like a good idea, but still needs a lot of work.

^^Needs Improving^^
Mostly, this was just boring to me. It was really hard to watch it to the end. I don't see how a Shoop and a Chocobo are part of the downfall of NG, which didn't make much sense to me. Needs more excitement, and definitely too long for what was offered.

Paradox responds:

I think the only bit which really dragged is the final boss where it kind of takes ages before it dies, but I have to agree, there was too much talking and not enough battling.

I actually like the Shoop fad, it was just the first fad which came into my head, and since it was mainly about fads being the downfall of NG, which anyone can agree is true. Apart from Shoop and that delightful Magikarp.

Thanks for the review.

[- Atlanta 2040 -]

K

^^Good Points^^
I can't deny that the graphics do look pretty nice. You did a fine job of making this a detailed drawing and animation. I'm not quite sure what it is supposed to mean, but it still looked cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit disappointing. You didn't have much of a storyline in here or anything, in fact it was just a single frame. I hope the sequels will address this problem.

[Zelda: Heart for the Fag]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, I have to say that I haven't enjoyed a Turd of the Week this much for a long time. First off, that is the most awesome menu I have ever seen, and that background clip is really neat. As far as the movies go, they were both pretty awesome. There was actually some effort putting into making them, and they weren't as short as I expected them to be. Really quite entertaining.

^^Needs Improving^^
The menu is a little deceiving. When I first watched this, I just though that was all the movie was.

BRB-FBI responds:

we've made loads of menus like that and no one has noticed before