FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Two Guys Talking]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess the joke was a little ironic and a tad bit funny. Though it's not a bad amount of humor considering the movie is only ten seconds long.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, I like my movies to be quick, but if they are going to be quick they need something to make them stand out, like nice graphics. Looks like you have some decent drawing and animating skills, so I think you should have done something in the background of this.

[C&C Shorts Trailer]

K

^^Good Points^^
This had some neat themes to it, and the in game images you used throughout were pretty cool. I think this was set up pretty well and looks like you have some promising animations coming out.

^^Needs Improving^^
My problem with this trailer is that it doesn't really preview anything of your upcoming movies. It's just a bunch of random animations, but no scenes from the movie or anything.

[Luis or jonthompson?]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hehe, I liked this movie, it was pretty funny. I liked the way you built this up with the music, and asking for a response from one of them is just a funny way to go out on this movie. Very interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some things went a little too fast for me to read, like the opening paragraph and the post that you showed from the topic in question.

possibly-yodd responds:

Should maybe have left more frames.

Well, I made it quickly. thanks for the review.

[Luis At The Theaters.]

K

^^Good Points^^
The voice acting was pretty good. I thought for the most part this was enjoyable to listen to, as they both said some pretty funny things.

^^Needs Improving^^
I understand you only had half an hour for this, but there was absolutely no animation to supplement this. You should have definitely added something more besides a mostly black screen and a few small shadowy animations.

TheCriminalDuder responds:

Thanks for the complimenting my voice acting.

But listen... Don't bitch about the graphics and give me this "needs improvment" crap. I made it quick for nothing more then a quick laugh. When I make something serious then you can tell me what I need to improve. 'Cause if I made something (for example this) just quick and for fun. Then of course I'm not gonna go all out or even be serious on it.

[Urban Myths: Disney]

K

^^Good Points^^
The intro at least made this seem interesting and well made.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly it's all just a little bit stretched to me. You had a picture of a brush handle and compared it to a joint. Are you serious? Everything in here is stretched really far and I doubt that Walt Disney really though that his statue looked like a middle finger. Honestly, it'd be a lot better if half of the stuff actually looked like what it was supposed to be.

[Happy Friday]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty entertaining movie. I liked the different personalities of the characters, and the voice acting was believable too, which was cool. I got a few good laughs out of this, from each character. A very well rounded movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The voice overs were very good, but they seemed to not be as loud as most other movies, and I had some trouble hearing them before I turned up my volume.

[BBQ-Town 2500]

K

^^Good Points^^
That was a pretty sweet movie, haven't seen anything by you in a while, and this was a neat thing to put up. You've come a long way in the way of making movies. This had a great storyline with very funny characters. I especially liked the hotdog men. By the way, what the hell was the boss guy supposed to be?

^^Needs Improving^^
Fart joke too obvious.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Fart joke too obvious?

Awwwww noo it wasnt. :D