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[Father & Son In: Trip]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
For your first submission it's not bad work. You've got a few good animation techniques in this movie, like the trees in the foreground and background during the walking scene. Some comical parts in this movie, and I think the censorship actually worked to the advantage here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, first thing that I didn't like was the voice acting. Speak a bit more clearly, had a hard time hearing sometimes. Also, seemed a little disjointed. Like what happened with that deer or whatever that popped out of the bush? I was expecting something more than just the dad freaking out in that scene.

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[gouistory]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Maplestory sprites are pretty neat to use, they are very defined. Animation wasn't bad, storyline ended up not being so bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly a bit boring for most of the time. Needs some more realistic dialogue and needs to move a bit faster. Keep working on it...not bad for being your first sprite animation.

[There She Is!! step4]

(title in work)

Simply amazing. These past two parts of the series have really deviated from the first two, but definitely not in a bad way. Again, the music really made this movie great. I could feel the pain in the vocals and that is obviously the feelings that these two feel. This is a very powerful movie with a very powerful message. I can't wait for the next episode, this is an intense series!

Also, the new graphics style was definitely neat. Well done, as always!

[There She Is!! step3]

(title in work)

I didn't think there was ever going to be a third installment of this series, so I'm very delighted to see the story continue. You once again picked a delightful tune to go along with the animations, which were very smooth and very detailed, as we are used to seeing from you. The storyline was very cute, it had me laughing a few times. Going to watch the conclusion now, great job!

[Octopus Moustache]

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^^Good Points^^
That was definitely interesting, kind of trippy with the background and the music in there. Made me laugh a couple of times. I especially liked the ending. Not sure what octopus moustache is, but this gave me a laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
Part with Obama Hillary and McCain was boring as hell. Not sure if this was politically motivated or not, but that part was boring.

[Soylent Fuchsia]

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^^Good Points^^
This was a very good movie. The graphics definitely made it very unique, which is definitely useful in today's world of hundreds of clock day films. The storyline was nothing amazing, but it definitely had some good qualities.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some of the speakonia was pretty low, but nothing too serious. Happy Clock DAY!!!

[Koalaclock's 2008 movie]

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^^Good Points^^
Not a very generic Clock Day movie. Mainly because you recorded voices instead of speakonia. This was both good and bad. I felt that it did a great job of capturing SBC's crazy anger. Very nice graphical effects and animations. Happy Clock Day!!

^^Needs Improving^^
Generic Girl Clock was kind of hard to understand, as was Rupee...there's the downsides of recorded voices.

[All your bread]

(title in work)

Very good, very good. I wasn't expecting much from this other than some poorly produced spinoff, but this one was actually pretty entertaining to watch, I think. You followed the guidelines of the original AYB well and added your own humorous spin to it. Only thing that could be improved would be the graphics. Needs more color in it overall.

[feeding time]

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^^Good Points^^
I was surprised by how good the use of gradients used in this movie looked. In most cases using gradients in Flash just looks bad. I guess you've got a knack for it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Definitely could use a bit of sound to spice things ups. The movie was pretty short too, I think you need to add a bit more storyline to your next movie.

[Strawberry 2095]

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^^Good Points^^
A great music video. I really liked the music, it was an interesting tune that I've never heard before. I think it fit well with the storyline and the events in the animations. Some good images and interesting animations throughout this movie. Happy clock day!

^^Needs Improving^^
Some of the stuff was a bit overused throughout this movie. Other than that, have a happy clock day!