FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[r+m: late night show]

K

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't completely bad. I liked how you had the menu on the bottom with movie controls and volume control, that is a nice feature.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't a great movie. The low voices just made this boring. Nothing really exciting happened and I was just bored throughout this. The simplistic graphics don't help this either! Seriously, you need to make this more exciting.

[A Very 'Lonely' Christmas]

K

^^Good Points^^
I watched and reviewed the first one you submitted, which didn't make much sense, but this version is a lot better. It was cute how all of the penguins got stuck in the tree, which made the storyline a lot clearer. I liked the style of drawing, very simple, yet gets the job done. The music was definitely fitting too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, I don't get the yellow snowman guy walking around at the end. Other than that, perhaps this doesn't really fit with the message you have at the end.

[Born to Rock]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics are amazing. I loved how everything was drawn with crayon. I think you would have great success if you used this graphical style in a full length movie with a decent storyline. The preloader was great, and I liked the animations and how everything was constantly jiggling.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, nothing interesting happens in this movie. Those two guys just stand their and play two different songs at the same time. You should really use this graphic style to make a full length movie.

[PineyAndSHakeAReSpics4]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings weren't half bad. They were good drawings and could be used for a much better movie. The high framerate makes this much better too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really nothing happens in this. It's a shorty story of a bunch of glocks having sex or something like that. I'm not too impressed or entertained right now.

[StickClock Clock Day]

K

^^Good Points^^
This reminds me of clock day, which is a fun day.

^^Needs Improving^^
Clock day means pretty lax effort from a lot of people. This is a prime example This submission consists of just a stick person with a face consisting of two lines. Had you not said this was a clock, I would have never known it was one. The animation lasts for a total of about half a second, which isn't enough to develop anything that could make this a good submission.

[Loading Screen]

K

^^Good Points^^
The part with jesus talking was pretty funny. He said some random things, but they were still funny. The screaming part was also very unpredictable, which is a good thing, usually screamers aren't this surprising.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it's a screamer, and I just cannot say that I enjoy watching them The parts you drew were really poor also.

[Emo? Lol-no.]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very funny movie. The song was hilarious. This was short, to the point, and still took some talent. Very creative and definitely worth watching.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is kind of lacking really good animations. You basically just took some images you drew and put them into a few frames.

[Mario Vs. Sonic IV]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is funny. However, it is not funny because of the movie itself, but more of the havoc it has created!

^^Needs Improving^^
Unlike most people, I remember the old preloader fad, with preloaders that never really load, so I won't make a fool of myself by saying that. This preloader wasn't even that good looking! I wouldn't use it in a submission myself.

[C goes to NG!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hey, 67kb, not a big waste of space or time! Yay!

^^Needs Improving^^
There is a lot I could say down here, but probably very few people will ever read it, especially not you the author, but I'll say it anyway. You did no drawings, just pictures of this "C" fellow and Tom, tweened and rotated around the screen over and over with flashy lights. I can tell from experience that something like this does not take much effort, so I was pretty disappointed by your work.