FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL-Mines bigger]

Nice tribute

^^Good Points^^
The graphics good. Nice drawings and animations, especially the partying at the end. I liked the speakonia, voice overs, and music in this flash especially. The end was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Storyline is a little weird.

[robowar 1]

A little boring

^^Good Points^^
I liked the way you drew out explosions. The explosions looked pretty good compared to what I've seen.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your animations are lacking. There isn't much animation of the actual sprites and the constant camera angle is kind of boring. There also isn't much of a storyline, just random fighting.

[mario and the cannon]

Good idea

^^Good Points^^
I think the graphics was the best aspect of this movie. Your sprite animation was very good and I liked the way you drew some things in like Mario's eyes, head cast, and wheel chair. The storyline was pretty good and there was some good humor in here, like when Mario hurt himself on the cannon. That facial expression you drew just cracked me up.

^^Needs Improving^^
One obvious thing that I found very annoying was the sound effects. I feel that you used Mario's expressions WAY too much. I turned down my volume just because they got too annoying. This was also pretty repetitive at the end.

dex-exe1234 responds:

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[Bottles]

Stupid

^^Good Points^^
None.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were terrible. The drawings were in black and white and were very crude. The animations made no sense and I didn't understand this at all because of the fact that the voice overs are inaudible since you scream into the mic. This is terrible.

[Strawberry at The Court]

Humorous

^^Good Points^^
Though this is very simplistic, and that usually isn't something I like in movies, this movie (i guess it's a movie) was pretty humorous. I liked the angry face as one of the court members and the way you animated SBC. That made it look a lot funnier.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music didn't really make sense. I would have picked something a little more fast paced or something funky.

[GG 4/21: The Kid]

Predictible

^^Good Points^^
The animations and drawings of the first part were pretty good. You used some nice detail and nice shading which made it look pretty good. And the background movement showed you knew what you were doing.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it is gost and piney on a bike riding around an angry face. it was obviously going to be a screemer since it doesn't loop. There wasn't much storyline and this was just real boring.

[Got It Like That]

>:( This makes me very angry

^^Good Points^^
The drawings wasn't bad at all, and it was pretty well animated.

^^Needs Improving^^
What the hell is this? What is the point of this? All it is a picture you drew and animated only slightly and a profile of yourself with useless information that no one cares about. I have to be missing something here, because this is just horrible from what I see. I don't know anyone who really cares who your friends are. Sheesh. Shame on you voters.

moosecream responds:

shame on your mom.

[The Abandoned Kitten]

Too short

^^Good Points^^
I liked the drawing for the kitten, he does look kind of sad. The music was also good because it sounded sad and added to the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, there really wasn't much in this. There wasn't any animation save for the gentle zoom out. Nothing really happened in this movie besides the text. I thought there was going to be some kind of ending to this and was disappointed in it.

DAIRYDOG responds:

You know my secrets for that you must die.