FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Abandoned Kitten]

Too short

^^Good Points^^
I liked the drawing for the kitten, he does look kind of sad. The music was also good because it sounded sad and added to the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, there really wasn't much in this. There wasn't any animation save for the gentle zoom out. Nothing really happened in this movie besides the text. I thought there was going to be some kind of ending to this and was disappointed in it.

DAIRYDOG responds:

You know my secrets for that you must die.

[Swat Insanity]

Yikes!

^^Good Points^^
I hope you are joking when you say this is the best thing you've submitted!

^^Needs Improving^^
The use of stick figures looks really lame in this flash. They aren't drawn with any detail at all as is most of this flash. The bullets, backgrounds, and just about everything else was drawn poorly. The sound was more annoying than anything.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Lol I wasn't joking a year ago.

[M.S.R.E Special Edition]

Much better!

^^Good Points^^
It is now obvious that your graphical skill is not at all well displayed in the previous episodes of this series. The animations in this one were much smoother and there were a lot more of them, which made the movie a lot less boring. The voice overs were a nice touch, and the improvements you made were very worthwhile.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I didn't like was that you didn't have a more complex menu where one could pick the episode they wanted to watch. That would have been a lot more useful than having to watch every episode over again.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

yeah I was planning to do that but completely rushed the end.

[M.S.R.E ep.3]

Decent

^^Good Points^^
The storyline is developing nicely, and I am becoming more interested in this series after every episode I watch. I thought the music was actually a pretty decent choice in this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations in this series are still lacking. For example, the big bomb scene looks pretty stupid as well as the zombie death scenes. I don't like how they just disappear.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

yeah me too but their is only one other death animation and I didn't want to over use it.

[M.S.R.E ep.2]

Well...

^^Good Points^^
The storyline is still pretty good and is developing nicely, and the blood you used was pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
The screen seemed to be constantly moving and there are always white borders moving in and out of the screen. The music once again, was very weird and didn't seem to fit. Also some of the animations were a little off (for example when the one zombie just disappeared).

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Yeah....see this is very old work.

[M.S.R.E ep.1]

Much better

^^Good Points^^
I felt that this is much better than episode 0. This one actually explained what was going on in the movie and gave a good introduction to the characters and their situation.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music once again, doesn't seem to go very well with the movie and the sound effects weren't very well with the animations.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Lol