FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clay Animation V Animator]

K

^^Good Points^^
An interesting idea for a clay movie. Instead of making a cheap knox ripoff like most people do, you actually made something creative and it turned out quite well. Everything is very smooth, even with your hand incorporated into the stopmotion. This was pretty fun to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought the characters could have been cleaned up a bit. They just seem like they were made very quickly, with lots of small details just just don't look right.

PhynStudios responds:

Thankyou for the good points.
The reason the characters were so bad was because it made itself. In Animation Vs Animator its just a stick man, because its the most simple thing to do and torture, and we underestimate them all.

[Horror amnesia]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best thing about this movie was the effects and changing camera views. I think you did a great job changing the camera around from time to time. The sound effects were pretty good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a little bland. There really wasn't a whole lot of animation in this. You didn't animated the killing at all, which just seems cheap. This was really short too, and the ending didn't satisfy me.

[Awesome N00bday Flash]

K

^^Good Points^^
The third noobday movie I've watched, and also the third one that I've liked. This was well presented. I liked the white noise between each scene. The randomness was hilarious. My favorite part had to be the conversation with SmarterChild. He's always fun to talk to. Nice job, and happy Noobday.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...I think this went a little too fast in order for me to fully enjoy and understand what was going on.

DrunkAlien responds:

Yeah, It got a little too fast.

Thanks for the review! :)

[You, it's NoobDay!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another great noobday submission! The best part had to be the music and sound effects. I loved the speakonia tones you used, and the things that were said were hilarious. The randomness was very fun to watch, and overall this was a very fun movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seriously, this should have been longer. Then again, I could watch random stuff like this all day long!

TheSoulMan responds:

Yeah, maybe I rushed it at the end :(

[Windows Collab 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I come home from school to see that it is the wonderful day of Noobday! In the same fashion of the first Windows collab, this was a great submission! The menu is very creative and the general windows theme like the "log off" button is cool as well. The actual parts of this were hilarious, and there is really too much to write in order to cover it all. Nice job, and happy Noobday!

^^Needs Improving^^
You could clean up the graphics as little bit, especially the menus and stuff. Just doesn't look quite like windows.

Little-Radiodemon responds:

I understand what you mean about the graphics.
But I'm abit bad at drawing lole P:
Still, you liked it atleast ;D

Happy N00bDay.

[BritClock Makes a Flash]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were the best part. You did good drawings and had good coloring in this as well. I thought the voice overs were decent as well. The high framerate was fun too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really not much in here. I have to say that I'd rather listen to Speakonia in clock movies. The storyline really wasn't funny at all, I don't see what people find so great about this. There wasn't much of a storyline and the ending made no sense at all.

BritClock responds:

Every time I submit a clock movie people complain about the Speakonia voices and the one time I submit one with real-life voices people complain about that

[DumbassDude Short ep 13]

K

^^Good Points^^
It's unfortunate that the series has slowed down recently, but nonetheless a godo addition to the episode. I knew this one would be good from the description. The storyline was infact funny and I enjoyed watching this, as always.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could have made the prison scene a tad bit funnier I think.

[Running down]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very unique movie. Usually I don't enjoy movies that lack storyline, but this was actually pretty enjoyable. It's one of those weird paradox type things and you did a good job with it. I liked your cirle little character and how you animated him walking around. The background was cool, as was the clock and music. Nice job making this weirder than it already was!

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...You could have done a little more with the graphics. Perhaps putting some more texture into it and details besides just a plain road. Just a thought though. This is pretty good as it is.

[Superbob Returns]

K

^^Good Points^^
Some of this was pretty funny. I laughed at seeing Bob Saget with his always smiling face. He just looks funny. I found it funny when Bob shot out the lightbulb too. Good stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
The movie seemed to go on forever! Seriously I was so bored by this. And having the same song play over and over again didn't help much at all.

[Embryonic Adventures]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very well done movie. The graphics are very well done, I especially liked how realistic you made the realistic items look. The shading and coloring was excellent. The music was a perfect choice, couldn't think of anything better to use. The storyline is very abstract, yet very enticing and fun to watch. Very good movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I wasn't completely satisfied with the ending. I just felt that a lot more was going to happen in this.

Review Request Club.

Borogrove responds:

Thank you so much. I can't believe how well people are responding to this movie. It definitely gives me motivation to continue and improve. I do feel I could have done more with the movie and the story line, except I was limited by my Flashing skills. Maybe sometime in the future I'll go back to it. Thanks again!