FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[3-D Motion Capture]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a fair submission. You did an excellent job with the drawings. I liked how they were constantly changing slightly. The angles were just about perfect, you did an excellent job with making this realistic. The music also went well with this.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would have liked this much better if it were colored or at least had some type of storyline, even if a small one was incorporated.

Flameviper responds:

I will probably do more in the future that hav storylines and colour. This one was just trying out the technique and seeing what the Newgrounds response would be (in this case, awesome). The funny thing is that this took almost no skill (except with the line tool, lol) and almost three weeks, it's only 30 seconds long, and it got awesome reviews. The Wrath of Dicey, which is like 2 minutes long, took awesome Flash skills, and took me almost three months, got OK reviews. LOL.

[Mr.Kiwi's Story]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie, especially for your first. The storyline was cute, I liked it. Your characters are unique and the storyline was unique and explained well also.

^^Needs Improving^^
As you said, the animations are really quite crude. I can deal with that, but my major problem about this is that it was pretty boring. The storyline seemed to drag on forever and I had to force myself to watch to the end. The lack of sound doesn't help your situation either. You definitely need to add sound.

omnimike responds:

Thanks for the constructive comment, I agree the pace can be improved and adding sound and music would help, I'll work on those if time permit :)

[No Moustache, No Life.]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not bad at all. You had great graphics. Lots of small subtle animations and great shading. I really liked the constant music or sound effects. The ending really clinched this though. Completely unexpected.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought this progressed really slow in the beginning and I got quite bored with it!

Daagah responds:

If I'd made the movie "fast progessed" it would've lasted for like 20 seconds, and then you'd be complaining about it being too short... thanks though.

[Clay Animation V Animator]

K

^^Good Points^^
An interesting idea for a clay movie. Instead of making a cheap knox ripoff like most people do, you actually made something creative and it turned out quite well. Everything is very smooth, even with your hand incorporated into the stopmotion. This was pretty fun to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought the characters could have been cleaned up a bit. They just seem like they were made very quickly, with lots of small details just just don't look right.

PhynStudios responds:

Thankyou for the good points.
The reason the characters were so bad was because it made itself. In Animation Vs Animator its just a stick man, because its the most simple thing to do and torture, and we underestimate them all.

[Horror amnesia]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best thing about this movie was the effects and changing camera views. I think you did a great job changing the camera around from time to time. The sound effects were pretty good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a little bland. There really wasn't a whole lot of animation in this. You didn't animated the killing at all, which just seems cheap. This was really short too, and the ending didn't satisfy me.

[Awesome N00bday Flash]

K

^^Good Points^^
The third noobday movie I've watched, and also the third one that I've liked. This was well presented. I liked the white noise between each scene. The randomness was hilarious. My favorite part had to be the conversation with SmarterChild. He's always fun to talk to. Nice job, and happy Noobday.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...I think this went a little too fast in order for me to fully enjoy and understand what was going on.

DrunkAlien responds:

Yeah, It got a little too fast.

Thanks for the review! :)

[You, it's NoobDay!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another great noobday submission! The best part had to be the music and sound effects. I loved the speakonia tones you used, and the things that were said were hilarious. The randomness was very fun to watch, and overall this was a very fun movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seriously, this should have been longer. Then again, I could watch random stuff like this all day long!

TheSoulMan responds:

Yeah, maybe I rushed it at the end :(

[Windows Collab 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I come home from school to see that it is the wonderful day of Noobday! In the same fashion of the first Windows collab, this was a great submission! The menu is very creative and the general windows theme like the "log off" button is cool as well. The actual parts of this were hilarious, and there is really too much to write in order to cover it all. Nice job, and happy Noobday!

^^Needs Improving^^
You could clean up the graphics as little bit, especially the menus and stuff. Just doesn't look quite like windows.

Little-Rena responds:

I understand what you mean about the graphics.
But I'm abit bad at drawing lole P:
Still, you liked it atleast ;D

Happy N00bDay.

[BritClock Makes a Flash]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were the best part. You did good drawings and had good coloring in this as well. I thought the voice overs were decent as well. The high framerate was fun too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really not much in here. I have to say that I'd rather listen to Speakonia in clock movies. The storyline really wasn't funny at all, I don't see what people find so great about this. There wasn't much of a storyline and the ending made no sense at all.

BritClock responds:

Every time I submit a clock movie people complain about the Speakonia voices and the one time I submit one with real-life voices people complain about that

[DumbassDude Short ep 13]

K

^^Good Points^^
It's unfortunate that the series has slowed down recently, but nonetheless a godo addition to the episode. I knew this one would be good from the description. The storyline was infact funny and I enjoyed watching this, as always.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could have made the prison scene a tad bit funnier I think.