FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[=D]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were beatiful. You have an anime type style of drawing, and your coloring was very nice too. I like how you made this look like a dreamy type memory (or atleast that is what I thought). The music really fit the mood too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The end was weird. Unfortunately you didn't really develop a good storyline. Also, I would have liked the blank area around the edges to be the exact same color as the NG background. Just would have made it look that much cooler.

[DailyToon SE: PJ]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, this was funny in some parts. I got a laugh out of the beginning with Abe lincoln and all of the funny pics you added into this were funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really just dragged on far too long. I couldn't really enjoy it after the first few minutes of listening to crazy tuba noises. You should have added somethings besides that guy dancing around and a few random images.

psychojester responds:

lol, tuba noises.

[Dr. Frankenstein & Igor]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely not a terrrible movie, and much better than most movies around this score. The drawings were quite good. You shaded a lot and had lots of small details in this. The sound clips was clear and kind of humorous. You also lip synced which was a good thing.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really that funny. I was kind of bored while watching this. I'm sure you could have made this longer or added something funnier to it.

[Little Red rides da hood]

K

^^Good Points^^
Some of the background drawings weren't that bad. Atleast it looks like you put some effort into trying to make this look good.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline wasn't really good at all. It's an overdone tale and you weren't very funny in this. The animations were very crude. Sound effects were sparing and there wasn't any music or voice overs.

[Humpcity!]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was mildly entertaining. I liked how funny your characters were and how the "Fag" kept getting his head knocked off. You had lots of background music and sound effects too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, the graphics were really terrible. Your animations were not realistic one bit, and they really were slopily done. You could really fine tuen your animations and put more detail in both the animations and drawings to make this much better. The voice overs also were very low quality. Try sitting further from your mic when your record something.

[magneticroboticmetalgrey]

K

^^Good Points^^
Atleast you used some shading in this, which is a good thing. Atleast you put some detail into the drawings.

^^Needs Improving^^
This isn't really entertaining at all. It doesn't showcase a storyline or really any sequence of events, rather just a no-name clock who changes color and changes his face. Not very fun to watch or entertaining. Needs some sound too atleast.

[Sock Throw]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, just about everything in this movie is well done! I thought your drawing style was quite unique, I loved the way you drew you "unsuspecting opponent" and the animations were just as random, yet that just made this so much funnier. I really laughed at this and watched it three times before I became bored with it! Would love to see more work from you. Definitely deserves a higher score than it has now.

^^Needs Improving^^
Either make a longer version or make some other movie, because this is a great one!

[Fuzzy the Caterpillar]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like the character. He doesn't look like much, but he's got some personality or something. The music was unique, which is always a positive thing.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, he sat on a branch for quite a while, which was pretty disappointing. You really shoudl have added some type of storyline or events that happen to the caterpillar dude. This could have been a lot better had it not just been a few frames with music.