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[Daily Day 3: Adam Ant 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good collection of some of your daily toon works. I liked the menu, it was pretty creative, and the way you had a description for each part is great. The movies themselves are for the most part pretty good. My favorites were "Van full of retards" and "Apple Country". Great music throughout each part.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really don't like the fact that the menu button only comes at the end of each part. Menu buttons during each part are always needed.

Adam-Ant responds:

The menu buttons were put at the end so people would sit through the whole movie.

Thanks for the review and happy daily day to you sir. :)

[Daily Day 3-MrBigStick]

K

^^Good Points^^
A decent movie. The sound clip was rather funny. It was very low, and I couldn't hear a lot the first time around, but not bad. I liked how Zekey was in this, and that old man was pretty cool too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is very empty. You didn't do much for backgrounds or anything graphical. This should be finished too. Just isn't that good unfinished.

MrBigStick responds:

the audio was called "indian car". i was looking for the song and found this dialog between two characters, and found it amusing.

[DailyDay3: Fat Bagder]

K

^^Good Points^^
Being completely honest, this is one of your better submissions that I have watched, and one of the better Daily Day movies I've watched thus far. The intro was very well made, as was the menu. The first part to this had very neat effects. I really like the old timey stuff people make. The third part was a very nice collage highlighting the Star Syndicate and its members.

^^Needs Improving^^
Part two was rather boring. It was just Fat Badger traveling through space, and I think we've seen about enough of that in your previous submissions!

[DailyDay3: Cold]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is definitely presented well, and looks very professional. The toons you selected to put in this were all decent movies. Your music choices throughout this were bar none, great stuff. My favorites were El Mariachi Loco and the one you don't have a title for. So far the best submission I've seen for daily day!

^^Needs Improving^^
Most of the toons you put in this weren't that interesting. They were mostly just shapes moving around and stuff. While the effects were cool, they just don't provide much entertainment.

[Honeybunch]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a cute submission. You got really creative with the images you used, and they were all well drawn. This also gave the movie some humor. Good audio quality too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like how long the logo screen lasted. As to improvements to the movie itself, I've got nothing :(

And by the way, what the heck was that picture of when the song said "cause" towards the end? A response would be appreciated.

MisterFeelGood responds:

Thank you very much, also for the tip.
The pictures that go with because where a B and a picture of the Greece Island Kos, I couldn't think of an easy way to visualise cause.

[Enter The Dragon]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, definitely a funny movie. Reading the comments you created for this made me think it was going to be a serious movie, but seeing Hitler grooving out to some funky music was completely unexpected. Nice job on making a funny little movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like the random google images you used, like the kid from Home Alone. Stuff like that just make a movie look bad. You could have did a little better cropping some of the heads too.

Slick responds:

Heh, don't worry dude. This movie was just something stupid I made this morning. I'm glad that batting averages are only rated on your 3 highest rated movies now. It means that you can create funny, stupid submissions like this and be able to keep a high BA. Thanks for the review :)

[r+m: late night show]

K

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't completely bad. I liked how you had the menu on the bottom with movie controls and volume control, that is a nice feature.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't a great movie. The low voices just made this boring. Nothing really exciting happened and I was just bored throughout this. The simplistic graphics don't help this either! Seriously, you need to make this more exciting.

[A Very 'Lonely' Christmas]

K

^^Good Points^^
I watched and reviewed the first one you submitted, which didn't make much sense, but this version is a lot better. It was cute how all of the penguins got stuck in the tree, which made the storyline a lot clearer. I liked the style of drawing, very simple, yet gets the job done. The music was definitely fitting too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, I don't get the yellow snowman guy walking around at the end. Other than that, perhaps this doesn't really fit with the message you have at the end.

[Born to Rock]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics are amazing. I loved how everything was drawn with crayon. I think you would have great success if you used this graphical style in a full length movie with a decent storyline. The preloader was great, and I liked the animations and how everything was constantly jiggling.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, nothing interesting happens in this movie. Those two guys just stand their and play two different songs at the same time. You should really use this graphic style to make a full length movie.