FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[30 Second Collab #1]

K

^^Good Points^^
As always, a well made collab from the noob nation. Each part in this had its own good qualities to it. I liked the star wars section of this best. However, you had a good mixture of stuff in here...good graphics, not so good, etc.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the fact that no part of this had anything to do with any other part in the movie. When presented like this, I would expected some type of theme to the different parts of this.

Little-Rena responds:

I see.
Though not all of the time when presented like this they have a theme to each one.
It was just to keep things diffrent I suppose.
Yeah :S

Thanks for the review all the same.

[Strawberry's Clock-O-Ween]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a great movie! The storyline was really funny throughout. You said a lot of pretty random things in this and the length was great. You spent a lot of time on the graphics, lots of shading and good animation. I really liked the run away scene, and having Pube muppet in this was just awesome. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
After turd was sent to jail this got a little weird. Especially in between the saw scene, there was little sense in those parts.

[DD3: Wade Makes A Post]

K

^^Good Points^^
It's really unfortunate that all Daily Day movies aren't as good as this! This was really quite funny. The sound clip was very funny, and animating wade to it, just makes it ten times better. The ending was great too. That was very unexpected!

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...I guess I'd have to say that this doesn't really have a Daily Day feeling to it. Perhaps a different preloader would help out.

[Daily Day 3: Adam Ant 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good collection of some of your daily toon works. I liked the menu, it was pretty creative, and the way you had a description for each part is great. The movies themselves are for the most part pretty good. My favorites were "Van full of retards" and "Apple Country". Great music throughout each part.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really don't like the fact that the menu button only comes at the end of each part. Menu buttons during each part are always needed.

Adam-Ant responds:

The menu buttons were put at the end so people would sit through the whole movie.

Thanks for the review and happy daily day to you sir. :)

[Daily Day 3-MrBigStick]

K

^^Good Points^^
A decent movie. The sound clip was rather funny. It was very low, and I couldn't hear a lot the first time around, but not bad. I liked how Zekey was in this, and that old man was pretty cool too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is very empty. You didn't do much for backgrounds or anything graphical. This should be finished too. Just isn't that good unfinished.

MrBigStick responds:

the audio was called "indian car". i was looking for the song and found this dialog between two characters, and found it amusing.

[DailyDay3: Fat Bagder]

K

^^Good Points^^
Being completely honest, this is one of your better submissions that I have watched, and one of the better Daily Day movies I've watched thus far. The intro was very well made, as was the menu. The first part to this had very neat effects. I really like the old timey stuff people make. The third part was a very nice collage highlighting the Star Syndicate and its members.

^^Needs Improving^^
Part two was rather boring. It was just Fat Badger traveling through space, and I think we've seen about enough of that in your previous submissions!

[DailyDay3: Cold]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is definitely presented well, and looks very professional. The toons you selected to put in this were all decent movies. Your music choices throughout this were bar none, great stuff. My favorites were El Mariachi Loco and the one you don't have a title for. So far the best submission I've seen for daily day!

^^Needs Improving^^
Most of the toons you put in this weren't that interesting. They were mostly just shapes moving around and stuff. While the effects were cool, they just don't provide much entertainment.

[Honeybunch]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a cute submission. You got really creative with the images you used, and they were all well drawn. This also gave the movie some humor. Good audio quality too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like how long the logo screen lasted. As to improvements to the movie itself, I've got nothing :(

And by the way, what the heck was that picture of when the song said "cause" towards the end? A response would be appreciated.

MisterFeelGood responds:

Thank you very much, also for the tip.
The pictures that go with because where a B and a picture of the Greece Island Kos, I couldn't think of an easy way to visualise cause.

[Enter The Dragon]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, definitely a funny movie. Reading the comments you created for this made me think it was going to be a serious movie, but seeing Hitler grooving out to some funky music was completely unexpected. Nice job on making a funny little movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like the random google images you used, like the kid from Home Alone. Stuff like that just make a movie look bad. You could have did a little better cropping some of the heads too.

Slick responds:

Heh, don't worry dude. This movie was just something stupid I made this morning. I'm glad that batting averages are only rated on your 3 highest rated movies now. It means that you can create funny, stupid submissions like this and be able to keep a high BA. Thanks for the review :)