FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The missing brownies]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good start for you CC career. I saw your next movie in this series in the portal, so I will view that afterwards, and I have to say I am looking forward to watching it. The graphics in this were fairly well done. The best part was the animations. The storyline is pretty silly in this, but I enjoyed watching it.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seemed to move very quickly. I like to sit in the moment of a clock movie, but this one was over before it started!

[How Many Licks "2"...]

K

^^Good Points^^
Though I never found anything too sexual about those commercials, every time I see it from now on I will think of nothing but the little animals biting off the dudes wiener. I like how you conducted the end, it got the point across very well with the guys twitching eyes, but actually never showed the biting, which was good.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were pretty poor. Your backgrounds were just gradients. You should have at least done some nature type background, if for nothing more than to make this appear nicer. The sound quality was pretty low too.

[Bignose Kills a Baby]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a good submission, I think it's obvious that you put some thought and work into this. You had mostly subtle animations, but they added a lot to this. The sound effect of the screaming was also perfect and very effective. It made me want the baby to die! The end was neat too.

^^Needs Improving^^
There was a little bit of lag in between the scream and the rip sound effect, which made this look a little rushed.

[F*#K Kickers]

K

^^Good Points^^
Absolutely none.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, this is a flash portal, buddy, however, this doesn't contain an ounce of Flash work. You put some video clip that wasn't even that funny into Flash and then submitted it here. If I wanted to hear what some unintelligent nobody cared about kickers in the NFL, I would really try and look for that, but here on NG we want Flash work, not imported videos. Try this at youtube.

[Pickle Curiosity]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very good graphics in this movie. You moved the camera around a lot, and most stuff was drawn to look three dimensional, and you did great on creating that effect. I like how you did your own voice overs and if the song was original even better. The rhyming was great and the song was pretty funny. The ending was also very unexpected and pretty humorous as well. Good job and congrats on getting the front page.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really all that funny until the end of the movie. I guess it's funny that this guy was walking about asking for a pickle, but really you could have added so much more to this. More animations and some funnier lyrics.

[Boy Wilson takes a walk]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics in this were good. You used accurate shading and good animations too. I liked the music and sound effects you used in this too. The ending was also cool with that sound effect.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the storyline in this. The viewer doesn't even find out what happens to this dude. He just gets hit by rocks out of no where. I would have liked to know where from. I felt bad for the little man!

TehDeuce responds:

It was supposed to be just a random brutal movie, but the next one will satisfy your needs for a better plot.

[bubble man 5]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good addition to the series. The graphics were well made. Good animations and not bad in the way of drawings. Storyline was funny, I got a laugh at the irony of the ending. Good stuff throughout though.

^^Needs Improving^^
While this has pretty good sound effects, I think it could use some subtle background music in order to enhance this a little bit.

[Gulley]

K

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't THAT bad, it was pretty well made I think. The graphics were pretty good. Lots of shading and subtle, realistic animations. The character was cute as well, and the storyline was pretty cute as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can see why people don't like this. Most likely because there really isn't a clear storyline in this, and it ends really where nothing happened in the movie before. Try adding some more events to your next movie.

[My Little Intro on CC]

K

^^Good Points^^
Better than most CC intros on NG. The graphics were actually pretty good. There was lots of shading and realistic lighting, which is always a good thing. The animations were smooth too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The jokes weren't that good, and they are used in a lot of CC intro movies. The whole "Hello my name is" deal is really overused and so is the interaction with the triangle. I wouldn't mind seeing more movies by you though.

EraserLock responds:

:D