FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bignose Kills a Baby]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a good submission, I think it's obvious that you put some thought and work into this. You had mostly subtle animations, but they added a lot to this. The sound effect of the screaming was also perfect and very effective. It made me want the baby to die! The end was neat too.

^^Needs Improving^^
There was a little bit of lag in between the scream and the rip sound effect, which made this look a little rushed.

[F*#K Kickers]

K

^^Good Points^^
Absolutely none.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, this is a flash portal, buddy, however, this doesn't contain an ounce of Flash work. You put some video clip that wasn't even that funny into Flash and then submitted it here. If I wanted to hear what some unintelligent nobody cared about kickers in the NFL, I would really try and look for that, but here on NG we want Flash work, not imported videos. Try this at youtube.

[Pickle Curiosity]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very good graphics in this movie. You moved the camera around a lot, and most stuff was drawn to look three dimensional, and you did great on creating that effect. I like how you did your own voice overs and if the song was original even better. The rhyming was great and the song was pretty funny. The ending was also very unexpected and pretty humorous as well. Good job and congrats on getting the front page.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really all that funny until the end of the movie. I guess it's funny that this guy was walking about asking for a pickle, but really you could have added so much more to this. More animations and some funnier lyrics.

[Boy Wilson takes a walk]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics in this were good. You used accurate shading and good animations too. I liked the music and sound effects you used in this too. The ending was also cool with that sound effect.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the storyline in this. The viewer doesn't even find out what happens to this dude. He just gets hit by rocks out of no where. I would have liked to know where from. I felt bad for the little man!

TehDeuce responds:

It was supposed to be just a random brutal movie, but the next one will satisfy your needs for a better plot.

[bubble man 5]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good addition to the series. The graphics were well made. Good animations and not bad in the way of drawings. Storyline was funny, I got a laugh at the irony of the ending. Good stuff throughout though.

^^Needs Improving^^
While this has pretty good sound effects, I think it could use some subtle background music in order to enhance this a little bit.

[Gulley]

K

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't THAT bad, it was pretty well made I think. The graphics were pretty good. Lots of shading and subtle, realistic animations. The character was cute as well, and the storyline was pretty cute as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can see why people don't like this. Most likely because there really isn't a clear storyline in this, and it ends really where nothing happened in the movie before. Try adding some more events to your next movie.

[My Little Intro on CC]

K

^^Good Points^^
Better than most CC intros on NG. The graphics were actually pretty good. There was lots of shading and realistic lighting, which is always a good thing. The animations were smooth too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The jokes weren't that good, and they are used in a lot of CC intro movies. The whole "Hello my name is" deal is really overused and so is the interaction with the triangle. I wouldn't mind seeing more movies by you though.

EraserLock responds:

:D

[30 Second Collab #1]

K

^^Good Points^^
As always, a well made collab from the noob nation. Each part in this had its own good qualities to it. I liked the star wars section of this best. However, you had a good mixture of stuff in here...good graphics, not so good, etc.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the fact that no part of this had anything to do with any other part in the movie. When presented like this, I would expected some type of theme to the different parts of this.

Little-Radiodemon responds:

I see.
Though not all of the time when presented like this they have a theme to each one.
It was just to keep things diffrent I suppose.
Yeah :S

Thanks for the review all the same.

[Strawberry's Clock-O-Ween]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a great movie! The storyline was really funny throughout. You said a lot of pretty random things in this and the length was great. You spent a lot of time on the graphics, lots of shading and good animation. I really liked the run away scene, and having Pube muppet in this was just awesome. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
After turd was sent to jail this got a little weird. Especially in between the saw scene, there was little sense in those parts.