FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[the best jutsu ever]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were probably the best parts of this. You have good animating skills too, and most of the stuff was pretty well defined.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use a bunch of improvement. The main problem is that this is too hard to follow. This is caused one by the lack of sound, which makes this seem to move a lot faster. Also, without color it is harder to see what is going on during the movie. You should improve these next time you make a movie.

Kitsaku responds:

Thank you for your kind and honest critique. Almost everyone has said the same thing though, so it comes as no surprise everyone thinks sound and color are a must XD. I JUST learned how to add sound, and I think Tweening is my next big step. I'll add color when I'm a bit more comfortable with animating... but thank you so much for your critique.

[RuneScape Halloween 2006]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the music was decent. You used music from the game I think, and it went along with the Halloween theme in this.

^^Needs Improving^^
NG as a whole hates RuneScape. They despise it! I'm really surprised this even passed due to that fact. But anyway, this wasn't very interesting. You left private chat on, which was distracting, and the public chat was on too. You definitely should have turned it off. This wasn't particularly interesting either, and I refuse to believe you did all you could to compress this video. Unfortunately, not interesting enough for me to visit your website.

[Albuquerque: THE MOVIE]

K

^^Good Points^^
I agree, it is amazing no one has taken the time to make a movie for this song, but I think the reasons are obvious. I'm really glad that someone actually had the patience. This was definitely worth watching all eleven minutes, which is something I rarely do with Flash movies. The characters you created were amazing. The main guy was quite interesting, and he fit the song well. The drawings were very well done, and I really loved how you animated this. This followed the song exactly, and you added a ton of stuff into this to make it even better. Great job, this will definitely get a daily award (or at least it should!).

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...perhaps the scene select would serve more at the beginning of the movie.

RWappin responds:

The scene selection IS at the beginning of the movie. ;)

[Banana Phone]

K

^^Good Points^^
How did I never watch this movie on my one and a half years of being on NG? I wish I had watched it sooner! The voice overs were amazing, you acted very well and showed a lot of emotion. The drawings were great, unique style and good animations too. I really loved the whole storyline in this. Great song, and great storyline. This was very fun to watch. Great job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...Perhaps the graphics could have been improved by some more shading or some outlines.

[MROL 3 Trailer]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad trailer. You gave enough background for the movie so that one doesn't have to go back and watch the first few episodes to understand what is going on. The music you used and the text that you used was cool too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can't say this really makes me want to watch the next episode. You had hardly any animation besides the text throughout. You should have added some more clips from the upcoming episode to get people more excited.

[Gladiator Battle vs Stone]

K

^^Good Points^^
When I saw wpnFire under your other submissions I knew I had to watch this movie. Glad I did, because it is a pretty sweet movie. The animations were great. You had lots going on and you were always changing the camera angle. All of your drawings were good too. The best part though, had to be the sound effects. They were so loud and powerful that they just put the viewer there, right in front of the action.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is a lot shorter than your other stick movies, which I think will hold this back and get it less acknowledgment than it deserves.

[New Job]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a good movie! The voice overs were really unique and very clear, which is great. There was a ton of humor in this, I really liked the interesting jobs you thought up for the simulator. I definitely had fun watching this.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics need most improving. Your animations are decent, but your drawings need the most improving. I'd say also work on your lip syncing. It isn't really realistic as it is now.

[Law & Order]

K

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't a bad movie. The best part had to be the music and voice overs. The voice overs were very well acted and varied a lot from character to character, which is quite important. There were a few funny parts in this too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the graphic style you used. The way you animated them talking just looks stupid, and you didn't really sync the talking to the voices either. The animating was pretty bad overall.

SharkFin-Maniac responds:

I agree with you completely, the lip synching sucks.

The casting worked so well because of MiRa - he brings off these really weird voices!

[What the...]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were the best part about this. You drew very well. Your characters had definition and were three dimensional. I liked how you added small animations, like the one dudes eyes constantly moving.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really wasn't what I expected. The guy comes up and screams in a very annoying fashion and then walks away. I would have liked this better had it had something happen at the end. The way you ended this was just lame.