FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Banana Phone]

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^^Good Points^^
How did I never watch this movie on my one and a half years of being on NG? I wish I had watched it sooner! The voice overs were amazing, you acted very well and showed a lot of emotion. The drawings were great, unique style and good animations too. I really loved the whole storyline in this. Great song, and great storyline. This was very fun to watch. Great job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...Perhaps the graphics could have been improved by some more shading or some outlines.

[MROL 3 Trailer]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad trailer. You gave enough background for the movie so that one doesn't have to go back and watch the first few episodes to understand what is going on. The music you used and the text that you used was cool too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can't say this really makes me want to watch the next episode. You had hardly any animation besides the text throughout. You should have added some more clips from the upcoming episode to get people more excited.

[Gladiator Battle vs Stone]

K

^^Good Points^^
When I saw wpnFire under your other submissions I knew I had to watch this movie. Glad I did, because it is a pretty sweet movie. The animations were great. You had lots going on and you were always changing the camera angle. All of your drawings were good too. The best part though, had to be the sound effects. They were so loud and powerful that they just put the viewer there, right in front of the action.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is a lot shorter than your other stick movies, which I think will hold this back and get it less acknowledgment than it deserves.

[New Job]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a good movie! The voice overs were really unique and very clear, which is great. There was a ton of humor in this, I really liked the interesting jobs you thought up for the simulator. I definitely had fun watching this.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics need most improving. Your animations are decent, but your drawings need the most improving. I'd say also work on your lip syncing. It isn't really realistic as it is now.

[Law & Order]

K

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't a bad movie. The best part had to be the music and voice overs. The voice overs were very well acted and varied a lot from character to character, which is quite important. There were a few funny parts in this too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the graphic style you used. The way you animated them talking just looks stupid, and you didn't really sync the talking to the voices either. The animating was pretty bad overall.

SharkFin-Maniac responds:

I agree with you completely, the lip synching sucks.

The casting worked so well because of MiRa - he brings off these really weird voices!

[What the...]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were the best part about this. You drew very well. Your characters had definition and were three dimensional. I liked how you added small animations, like the one dudes eyes constantly moving.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really wasn't what I expected. The guy comes up and screams in a very annoying fashion and then walks away. I would have liked this better had it had something happen at the end. The way you ended this was just lame.

[The missing brownies]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good start for you CC career. I saw your next movie in this series in the portal, so I will view that afterwards, and I have to say I am looking forward to watching it. The graphics in this were fairly well done. The best part was the animations. The storyline is pretty silly in this, but I enjoyed watching it.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seemed to move very quickly. I like to sit in the moment of a clock movie, but this one was over before it started!

[How Many Licks "2"...]

K

^^Good Points^^
Though I never found anything too sexual about those commercials, every time I see it from now on I will think of nothing but the little animals biting off the dudes wiener. I like how you conducted the end, it got the point across very well with the guys twitching eyes, but actually never showed the biting, which was good.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were pretty poor. Your backgrounds were just gradients. You should have at least done some nature type background, if for nothing more than to make this appear nicer. The sound quality was pretty low too.

[Bignose Kills a Baby]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a good submission, I think it's obvious that you put some thought and work into this. You had mostly subtle animations, but they added a lot to this. The sound effect of the screaming was also perfect and very effective. It made me want the baby to die! The end was neat too.

^^Needs Improving^^
There was a little bit of lag in between the scream and the rip sound effect, which made this look a little rushed.