FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Princess Rena]

K

^^Good Points^^
As always, the NN has developed a good movie for me to watch and review! It's always pleasant dealing with you fellows. This was rather funny. I like how you went through the entire castle and met all of the well-known NN members, as well as some unknown ones, like that diver! The music was great throughout, as were the graphics. You had very cool drawings, and good animations too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should really have voice overs, or at least make the subtitles more noticeable. I'm sure I missed some things that were said because I didn't even notice the subtitles changed!

Little-Rena responds:

Yeah, I did want voices but couldn't find anyone to do them P:
And my voice acting skills are pritty poor, lol.

I could have included some other members of NN but ran out of ideas, lol.

Thanks for the review.
I always enjoy reading them :)

[CC promo for oths]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were very good. You had above average drawings, with lots of detail. It's hard to draw the human body, and in such detail takes a lot of skill. The animations were pretty life-like too.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, I have no idea what this is a promo for. This was just a clip of a few people running, which wasn't very interesting. Also, think of not putting CC in the title. I thought this would be about clocks.

lumanious responds:

haha thanks alot man, anyway its the introduction to a speech givn by my highgschool coach to promot the cross coundtry team ( CC ) lol thanks for watchn and reviewin!

[TSAH2]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were definitely great. I really liked the menu layout. There was a ton of shading and the graphics were just very professionally done. The voice acting was well done too.

^^Needs Improving^^
For some reason I just can't say I really enjoyed this fully. First off, each section was like five minutes long, making for a full length movie, which really turned me off the most. I really didn't find most of this that funny either. Most of it just seemed like empty plot space.

[The Mysterious Box]

K

^^Good Points^^
Considering you put only an hour of work into this, it was very good. The graphics were cool looking. There was some shading, and very smooth and realistic animations. The sound effects were great too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't particularly funny or really that interesting to watch. You've got great potential, you just need to spend more time on making something with more depth do it.

[Battle for the sword!]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was fairly well made. At least you didn't keep the camera completely still, which would have been annoying. The animations were nice; there was a ton of action in this. The music was good and so were the sound effects throughout this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your stick figures aren't very defined, which needs to be done if you make any more of these. They look more like blobs, and like you said, the camera moves around a bit too much.

[Simon, Perry & Paul]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were decent. Well, they were all right, I suppose. I guess the shading made this look half decent. The music was at least high quality too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm really surprised this even got this score, considering it is just a loop that last for about two seconds. It really isn't that funny either. Some guy swinging and a bunch of other guys just happy they won the Olympics... what?

IAmSaul responds:

Not everything has to have a point to it, this didn't.
Many people like just random peices of stuff they can wonder at and try and figure out what's going on, so i made one for those people.

[Smoke Part 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a good start to a series, it's a shame you didn't continue it. The storyline was pretty intriguing and it was cool how interactive you made this. I really liked how you gave info about Skel-corp with that computer terminal, and you added a lot of background info into the language, and made it seem like normal discussion. Great music too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Try not putting too much of text in blocks. It just discourages people from reading it, and it is hard to read when you make the text smaller. Should have just made it more than one box. Wish you would have continued this series :(

[(CC)Thanx B!]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie wasn't too bad. The song was rather funny. The pictures you used were at least high quality, and this was kind of humorous actually.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would have rather seen some traced pictures instead of just gif images, they really don't look professional. This was incredibly short and really wasn't too entertaining.

[Dailytoon #300]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was great. It was really quite awe-inspiring, I wish I knew what it was.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't know why I though this would be a serious movie, and it would be nice if you actually did make a serious movie. I really didn't find it funny when the penis showed up.