FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Service Announcement 2]

Meh

^^Good Points^^
Good animations and drawings in this as well. I all the different images and texts you used in this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's a little too much like the first SA, which I didn't like at all. This didn't really say a whole lot compared to the first episode and I found it just too repetitive and a makes you seem like a huge elitist.

stoners-lunchbox responds:

--Good Points--
Great wording and confidence. For a moment you had me thinking that you knew what you were talking about.

--Needs Improving--
I wouldn't have restated the obvious if a certain "some people" would've got it the first time around. Don't call me "elitist" when i don't even know what the word means. I'm italian, not stupid.

[Service Announcement]

Funny

^^Good Points^^
Good effort on your part to make a movie that will let off some steam and also educate the public. I found this pretty funny and most of the stuff you said is true. The drawings and animations were pretty good, and your use of pieces of the site is very good. Voice overs were great as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This reminded me too much of Foamy. :s

stoners-lunchbox responds:

Once again, voice overs are mine. I like originality to the max whenever it can be used.

Unfortunately some people take me the wrong way and reckon that i'm trying to imitate Foamy the Squirrel... Seriously, where IS the resemblance? I don't have the same voice pitch, i'm not pagan, i'm a rat, not a squirrel and i don't address peope as "your lord and master". It's getting annoying having to explain myself over and over again, so please stop bringing up the same point over and over again. My voice can't be changed.

Thanks for the rest of the feedback, though.

[Behind the Magic]

Very good.

^^Good Points^^
I always like creative and original things, and this was very much of both. The voice overs were good choices and were both very clear. The script was very creative and funny. I got a good laugh out of this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some parts of this moved too slowly to hear or read what was being said.

stoners-lunchbox responds:

I like my movies slick and fast. I added subtitles for the sole purpose of making understanding just a tad easier.

The voice overs were actually mine. All sound i use are usually made by me (core sounds anyway, like introductory instrumentals, sound effects, music, etc). SOMETIMES i use other people's audio (Most famous example up to date: Denvish's "Going Down to Newgrounds" song).

Anyway, thanks for the feedback.

[Star Day: rtil]

Would be good finished.

^^Good Points^^
The animations were very fluid and were well done. I especially liked the pyramid in the background. The music was pretty funky. I'm not sure what this series could be about when you finish it, but I would be interested in watching them.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, the whole 2 second loop thing is what gets me on this one.

[Star day:Stressball-Q Die]

Huh?

^^Good Points^^
Atleast it was short and didn't waste too much of my time.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline is very boring and lacks content and meat to it. Not funny at all and the audio quality is very low. The graphics aren't too great either.

[The Final Revenge]

very good

^^Good Points^^
The FF theme in this was quite enjoyable. I liked the characters used and the drawings and animations were top notch. The script was real funny like "Obey me Fuckface". Who can't laugh at that? I also thought it was funny how Piclownjew was summoned. Good stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
The end was kind of bland.

[Night of Fire Collab]

F'n awesome.

^^Good Points^^
I thoroughly enjoyed watching this collab and really appreciate the work that you put into it for it is one of the best collabs I've seen on NG in a long while. Each part had a lot of effort put into it graphically and in terms of style. This made me laugh hella lots and the music was awesome. The menu was great with the scene select and the author bios.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I didn't like was that if you picked a scene to play from the scene selection, you don't go back to the menu after that section. That would be a nice touch.

Starberry responds:

sorry the way i put the parts together would not allow that last thing you mentioned unless i was more knowledgeable in actionscript which i am not

[Star Day : Jack Nicholson]

humorous

^^Good Points^^
This made me smile. The boy's face that you used was pretty funny and the dancing scene was very funny in the way that it was poorly animated and what not. Music was also awesome.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't very good in the fact that there wasn't a whole lot of work put into it. The graphics were very evident of this and it was a little too simplistic for me.

JackNicholson responds:

k

[Star Day 06: TruffleClock]

Not bad

^^Good Points^^
The graphics in this for the most part were very good. The shading and effects you used were top knotch, though the graphics were brought down by some unprofessional parts of the movie. The first part of this seemed interesting, but then it just ended without anything happening. I liked the music in the second part.

^^Needs Improving^^
A menu would have been nice, dividing the three sections. These also didn't follow a great storyline, though I know you had to just submit them for star day.