FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[penguin's day out]

Decent

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this movie was the graphics. The drawings were solid and the animations were very fluid and it's obvious you spent some time on the animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline lacks depth. This was a little too short for my tastes and wasn't really that funny. Work on something that is longer and has a more developed storyline.

[Mr. Toast: Episode 01]

AH!

^^Good Points^^
I wasn't expecting much from this movie from its score, but I actually thought it was a pretty decent movie. The story was a little random, but that made this pretty funny. The music also added to the humor. I like your characters and the ending was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Though I say the end is funny, this could use an ending that wraps something up or atleast makes some more sense.

Hoogiman responds:

Yay, you thought it was decent. :)

[My Kitty Cat]

Not much effort here...

^^Good Points^^
The drawings weren't terrible. The room and the cat were fairly drawn. NOT animated.

^^Needs Improving^^
As the last sentence of the above paragraph would suggest, I don't think the animations were a very good effort on your part. You just tweened your cat around and flipped it a few times. The music was very lame...why would you want to make a flash like this? Very poorly done.

[LL- Praise Allah!]

Pretty lame

^^Good Points^^
The only part I really liked about this collab was Lock's part. The Wierd Al music was a good choice, and the animation was kind of funny, as well as the voice over.

^^Needs Improving^^
The first two parts weren't that good, especially part one. I also would have liked a menu button on all three parts of this. The menu is also very bland. And the title is misleading. Man did I think this would be funny...

ClockLock responds:

Ah well, it was all done in one night. Thanks for the constructive critique though.

[Service Announcement 2]

Meh

^^Good Points^^
Good animations and drawings in this as well. I all the different images and texts you used in this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's a little too much like the first SA, which I didn't like at all. This didn't really say a whole lot compared to the first episode and I found it just too repetitive and a makes you seem like a huge elitist.

stoners-lunchbox responds:

--Good Points--
Great wording and confidence. For a moment you had me thinking that you knew what you were talking about.

--Needs Improving--
I wouldn't have restated the obvious if a certain "some people" would've got it the first time around. Don't call me "elitist" when i don't even know what the word means. I'm italian, not stupid.

[Service Announcement]

Funny

^^Good Points^^
Good effort on your part to make a movie that will let off some steam and also educate the public. I found this pretty funny and most of the stuff you said is true. The drawings and animations were pretty good, and your use of pieces of the site is very good. Voice overs were great as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This reminded me too much of Foamy. :s

stoners-lunchbox responds:

Once again, voice overs are mine. I like originality to the max whenever it can be used.

Unfortunately some people take me the wrong way and reckon that i'm trying to imitate Foamy the Squirrel... Seriously, where IS the resemblance? I don't have the same voice pitch, i'm not pagan, i'm a rat, not a squirrel and i don't address peope as "your lord and master". It's getting annoying having to explain myself over and over again, so please stop bringing up the same point over and over again. My voice can't be changed.

Thanks for the rest of the feedback, though.

[Behind the Magic]

Very good.

^^Good Points^^
I always like creative and original things, and this was very much of both. The voice overs were good choices and were both very clear. The script was very creative and funny. I got a good laugh out of this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some parts of this moved too slowly to hear or read what was being said.

stoners-lunchbox responds:

I like my movies slick and fast. I added subtitles for the sole purpose of making understanding just a tad easier.

The voice overs were actually mine. All sound i use are usually made by me (core sounds anyway, like introductory instrumentals, sound effects, music, etc). SOMETIMES i use other people's audio (Most famous example up to date: Denvish's "Going Down to Newgrounds" song).

Anyway, thanks for the feedback.

[Star Day: rtil]

Would be good finished.

^^Good Points^^
The animations were very fluid and were well done. I especially liked the pyramid in the background. The music was pretty funky. I'm not sure what this series could be about when you finish it, but I would be interested in watching them.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, the whole 2 second loop thing is what gets me on this one.

[Star day:Stressball-Q Die]

Huh?

^^Good Points^^
Atleast it was short and didn't waste too much of my time.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline is very boring and lacks content and meat to it. Not funny at all and the audio quality is very low. The graphics aren't too great either.

[The Final Revenge]

very good

^^Good Points^^
The FF theme in this was quite enjoyable. I liked the characters used and the drawings and animations were top notch. The script was real funny like "Obey me Fuckface". Who can't laugh at that? I also thought it was funny how Piclownjew was summoned. Good stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
The end was kind of bland.