FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wheres my schnitzel]

So-so

^^Good Points^^
Not sure where you got the sound from, but I liked it. It was a tad bit humorous, but was pretty random (and not the funny kind of random).

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations are very sloppy, they look like South Park, which in Flash movies means you are bad at animation. The part where the guy went to the kitchen was lame too... He kind of just sat on the side for a minute.

[Freerun: Go-Man, Scene 1]

No doubt, some of the best graphics ever

^^Good Points^^
As the title suggests, I am very highly impressed with the graphics in this movie. You superbly blended real life images with superb anime style drawings. The camera angles and constant perspective angles changing is freaking awesome. This really reminds me of the scenes from the Spiderman movies with him flying through the city. I loved the intro, and this storyline seems like it will deliver a good service to NG.

^^Needs Improving^^
Making a second part as good as this one will be hard.

[Ammugammu]

Wut?

^^Good Points^^
I liked the beginning part with those wierd looking creatures. That was pretty cool and I expected a lot more to come out of this.

^^Needs Improving^^
After the scene with those wierd drum-playing snail things, this went downhill. The whole trip scene was nothing but some shape tweens, which was really boring and after that, you just lost me. I was expecting this to be a music video from the beginning, which would have been a nice show, but alas...

[Happy Days wheyyyyy]

Random...yeah

^^Good Points^^
Well, the best part about this is the graphics (though they aren't even too impressive). The beginning showed some good animation in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm kind of torn between whether random is a good thing or not. I guess it really depends on my mood and exactly what happens. Unfortunately, this type of random is not my cup o' tea. It wasn't really funny at all, and was just a waste of my time to watch.

[Final Fantasy 7 Battle]

I lol'd

^^Good Points^^
I usually don't actually laugh out loud when I say I do, but for this I actually somewhat did. Actually, it was more of a wierd grunting type thing, but hey, that's more than most movies get. This was pretty funny. The graphics were pretty good, I liked how you drew the l33t translator dude, and the noob cannon was hella funny. Did I mention that this is funny?

^^Needs Improving^^
The beginning is a little bit wierd, I didn't really get the purpose. The close up graphics of Cloud's face etc, could use some touching up as well.

[penguin's day out]

Decent

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this movie was the graphics. The drawings were solid and the animations were very fluid and it's obvious you spent some time on the animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline lacks depth. This was a little too short for my tastes and wasn't really that funny. Work on something that is longer and has a more developed storyline.

[Mr. Toast: Episode 01]

AH!

^^Good Points^^
I wasn't expecting much from this movie from its score, but I actually thought it was a pretty decent movie. The story was a little random, but that made this pretty funny. The music also added to the humor. I like your characters and the ending was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Though I say the end is funny, this could use an ending that wraps something up or atleast makes some more sense.

Hoogiman responds:

Yay, you thought it was decent. :)

[My Kitty Cat]

Not much effort here...

^^Good Points^^
The drawings weren't terrible. The room and the cat were fairly drawn. NOT animated.

^^Needs Improving^^
As the last sentence of the above paragraph would suggest, I don't think the animations were a very good effort on your part. You just tweened your cat around and flipped it a few times. The music was very lame...why would you want to make a flash like this? Very poorly done.

[LL- Praise Allah!]

Pretty lame

^^Good Points^^
The only part I really liked about this collab was Lock's part. The Wierd Al music was a good choice, and the animation was kind of funny, as well as the voice over.

^^Needs Improving^^
The first two parts weren't that good, especially part one. I also would have liked a menu button on all three parts of this. The menu is also very bland. And the title is misleading. Man did I think this would be funny...

ClockLock responds:

Ah well, it was all done in one night. Thanks for the constructive critique though.