FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[You Make Me]

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I have to agree with most of these reviews that this movie was really quite amazing. The fact that it was made for love is even more awesome. Loved the song, definitely a great one by Al that needed a good music video. This had very smooth animations and some very funny drawings as well. Best part was when he was playing the guitar with random objects. Really liked how you synced up some parts of the movie to the song, cool job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really get the "Scene missing" part. I think it brought this down a bit. At least it was in the beginning, and I nearly forgot about it.

[Everything You Know Is Wrong]

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Wow. Once I saw in the icon that this was the same guy from the Albequerque movie, I knew it would be amazing. I was surprised this one was actually more enjoyable than the 12 minute masterpiece you submitted months ago. You've definitely gotten better at animating and drawing. You really made the craziness of this song come out well in the completely random and nonsensical animations. Definitely an amazing song to make a music video for, definitely one of Al's best songs. Amazing job, hopefully you will make another video.

[Stick and Stick Episode 6]

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^^Good Points^^
Definitely the best in the series so far. It was much longer than any episode, except for the previous one, but that one doesn't count. It was quite funny too. Very random humor and very random characters, but I really think the quick pace and randomness really made it a great episode. Loved it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I tend to be able to read this stuff pretty fast, but this was just a little bit too quick for me at some points. I missed a bit.

Lost-Wisdom responds:

Wow, great review. I'm so glad that I have a fan for this work. To tell you the truth, this series is more of a practice flash. After I'm done with this series. I'll start with some serious flash.

Yeah, I know, as always, It always seems to go to fast in some parts. But really, I'll fix it in the future. Thanks.

[Stick and Stick Episode 5]

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^^Good Points^^
I like the new idea of this Flash. I kind of liked the old random and playful style of the other episodes, but this wasn't too bad either. It was neat how you drew many different pictures to illustrate the storyline in the song.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sync was a bit annoying, though I know just as well as anyone how odd Flash can be when it comes to sound syncing up, so I don't blame ya much.

Lost-Wisdom responds:

Yeah, thanks for the input. And yeah, I drew a lot, but I finally figured when I played the music. It wasn't syncing at all...

Dang.

Be sure to the next episode later.

[Stick and Stick Episode 4]

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^^Good Points^^
I think the best show so far for this series. It seems as if you put a bit more time into the drawings and making them look a little less sloppy. Definitely a pretty humorous storyline, hopefully you continue this series.

^^Needs Improving^^
Reverted back to the old white background again, which I don't really like. Also, I wasn't a fan of the soundtrack in this one. The music was a really odd song...sounded like two songs playing at once.

Lost-Wisdom responds:

Ah, thanks for the part that this was the best one yet, because I really think so it is. Didn't like the soundtrack? Aw, oh well. I'll use some better music next time. I'm really glad you liked the storyline. And also the song where it shows the stick and stick is messed up. I couldn't fix it, so I left it like that.

I just know you loved the ending though.

[Stick and Stick Episode 3]

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^^Good Points^^
You changed the background, which is good. The storyline was interesting and random, as usual. I love their ability to state the obvious or point out completely random things.

^^Needs Improving^^
No idea what the hell happened at the end. Also, I thought the drawn text gave this a little bit more personality. I liked it better before you changed it.

[Stick and Stick Episode 2]

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I didn't think it was too bad at all. Parts of it were funny, like the "What just happened part?". I was thinking the same thing just as that came up. I like the style of talking and putting facial expression and such. Look forward to watching a few more episodes.

^^Needs Improving^^
White background is kind of boring. You should put some kind of background, even if it's just a solid color other than white.

[Sherlock Holmes Ep5]

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^^Good Points^^
A cool submission and addition to this series. I thought the terminator theme to this was pretty creative, and having him go back in the past was an original idea. Very funny throughout, great job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Took quite a while to get going. I thought you spent a bit too much time on the credits and such at the beginning.