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^^Good Points^^
I liked how you used the same music from the Audio portal. That made this almost sound kind of epic to me. The ending was kind of cool..."only time will tell". The webcam part was kind of random, but interesting.
^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you said it best, this isn't really interesting at all. I guess I shouldn't have expected it not to be very good, since you said it wasn't very good. And why must you always tag along with onnet?