FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[mythos medly]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings you made in this weren't too bad. Atleast I could tell what you were drawing and they weren't just cropped images from google or anything. The music wasn't bad. And for some reason, the many colors are almost hypnotic.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations are not very smooth, it's quite obvious that you should, if you ever revise this, increase the framerate and add a few more frames in between. This also seemed quite repetitive, mainly because you used the same images over and over and just changed colors or something. You shouldn't have used image backgrounds either, it just looks crappy.

heather-lanham responds:

yes, i'm changing the backgrounds, re-vamping and defineing the animations, and i'll re-submit later on.

[Worm!!?]

K

^^Good Points^^
I think that the animations in this short are top notch. Your stick animations are very life like and everything else is very fluid. The story was kind of funny as well, and I liked the music you added.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, this could have used some sound effects that would have been easy to find and place, like sounds from a bow and arrow. This is a little short too, and the ending was kind of lame.

[Newgrounds: The Future]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked how you used the same music from the Audio portal. That made this almost sound kind of epic to me. The ending was kind of cool..."only time will tell". The webcam part was kind of random, but interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you said it best, this isn't really interesting at all. I guess I shouldn't have expected it not to be very good, since you said it wasn't very good. And why must you always tag along with onnet?

Paradox responds:

Tag along with Onnet? What?

[Bbq-ish 100th movie]

Ok

^^Good Points^^
First off, congrats on getting 100 submissions with this one. The fuzzy graphics are neat as always. Nice voice overs and sound effects too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the farting joke is getting kind of old. I was really expecting you to have some different joke in this, but nonetheless, you still used it. Not very interesting.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

But,then again fart jokes are pure part of bbqbeefburgerman movies,THOUGH i could vary them a little.

Thanks anyhow.

[Newgrounds' gonna Change!]

K

^^Good Points^^
This made me laugh. Not only is it a great NG history lesson, but it's a humorous preview of what is to come. I liked the drawings you did, especially Tom and the animations were cool too. Cool idea and nice way you presented it to NG.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could have used some more sound effects to spice it up a little bit.

TheSoulMan responds:

Thanks!

But I wanted to leave the song like that :P

[The GameBoy Band]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad idea. It's an original idea, that's for sure and the movie was pretty fun to watch. You picked a decent song that went along with the sprites, which were pretty well animated.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, if you are ever making another one, a much more epic song would be cooler. One where you would be forced to use more than five characters would be awesome.

Review Request Club

[The Waltzing Hogs Collab2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I was pleasantly surprised not to find a single screamer in any major part of this movie. The musical choices were pretty good. Benny Hill, DDR, and Moskau sped up. Nice job there. This was pretty humorous too. I liked Fat piclownjew's part and wee piclownjew's part the best.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really the best efforts put into these. Most of them are really short and contain pretty lack luster drawings/animations and no storyline at all.