FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Turd of the Week"]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very true movie you made. I'm not a fan of these movies, so any satire against them is cool by me. I liked the many sound effects you put into this, they were great and the directions were kind of funny, like "the furrier the better!" was humorous. Overall, good job, and it needed to be said in a professional manner like this.

^^Needs Improving^^
It would have been a lot funnier if you had read off the instructions in some kind of jerky-type voice over and maybe added some more harsh comments about the series, but still well done.

KKyuubi responds:

I was trying to get this done ASAP, so there may have been some things I left out, but in the special Clock Day edition I happen to be planning, it will be narrated by StrawberryClock.

[story of killer1]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the spooky music choices you had in this movie, they fit the story well. I also thought the drawings in this movie were pretty good. Not a bad job in that.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations are very basic and kind of lame. I found it kind of boring how you didn't do the typing animation for the entire first scene, just looks like you got bored with it. The storyline wasn't that great, kind of boring and nothing really exciting happens.

[How To Make Propper Flash]

K

^^Good Points^^
Kind of cool how you put this one a piece of paper.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't see why people who have no knowledge of Flash make their first submissions tutorials. First off, stick figures are perfectly valid. If they are animated correctly and they have good drawings otherwise, it's a great movie, much better than this thing. The background you had looked terrible, that is not much better than some simple background hand drawn.

[The 3th metroid]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music you used in this, and the fact that you compressed it is always a good thing.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, it's 3rd, and not 3th. Your Samus drawing looks really stupid. Her abdomen is way too short and way too fat compared to her legs. Your animations mainly consist of rotating a large object and not paying attention to subtle details. The storyline isn't that exciting, samus spends some random time in one side of a tunnel, then moves to another tunnel where she freezes some guy and defeats a metroid.

[Gost Restaurants: IN 3D!;]

K

^^Good Points^^
I actually found this to be pretty entertaining. I thought it was funny how you made fun of ozcar many times throughout this movie and when you used him as taco sauce. The different images you used were hilarious, and I especially liked some of the drawings you used on the special sandwich. Good stuff, and the description to this movie is the best part.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, everything that is bad in this just kidn of makes it funnier.

Starberry responds:

ssssssssssssh dont say that one word of that one guy's name

[A little film about death]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings are pretty unique. Not sure if you just copied the image or what, but it looks like it is paintbrushed, which is neat. This is kind of cool in a way.

^^Needs Improving^^
Needs a preloader. Stuff without a preloader is annoying. This doesn't really have a lot of animation either and can get boring to some people pretty easily.

[TooF is serious business]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, this is the best thing I've seen so far today. I thought the drawings were hilarious of the kid, he looked really nerdy, nice job on that. The voice over had the same effect on him as well. The review he wrote was super hilarious, and the Limp Bizkit poster in his room was just funny. The ending really sealed it and gave this a nine instead of a seven for final score. "time to go watch pokemon!" was just great. Awesome job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Would have been good if you had decorated his room a little bit just to make him look like a weirdo.

[mythos medly]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings you made in this weren't too bad. Atleast I could tell what you were drawing and they weren't just cropped images from google or anything. The music wasn't bad. And for some reason, the many colors are almost hypnotic.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations are not very smooth, it's quite obvious that you should, if you ever revise this, increase the framerate and add a few more frames in between. This also seemed quite repetitive, mainly because you used the same images over and over and just changed colors or something. You shouldn't have used image backgrounds either, it just looks crappy.

heather-lanham responds:

yes, i'm changing the backgrounds, re-vamping and defineing the animations, and i'll re-submit later on.

[Worm!!?]

K

^^Good Points^^
I think that the animations in this short are top notch. Your stick animations are very life like and everything else is very fluid. The story was kind of funny as well, and I liked the music you added.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, this could have used some sound effects that would have been easy to find and place, like sounds from a bow and arrow. This is a little short too, and the ending was kind of lame.