FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Truth Of It All]

K

^^Good Points^^
It is kind of a funny idea of evil squirrels controlling everything.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is just a collection of poorly drawn images of people in different stages of life, and what the squirrels had to do with anything is kind of irrelevant. The pictures weren't drawn very well, and your squirrel pictures were pretty poorly edited.

[Jimmy in Pursuit]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought the drawings actually weren't that bad. You did some cool reflecting for shading if that makes and sense. The music was also pretty cool, and I like how you went right into the credits at the end.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't have a very good storyline, or really any development in storyline. Kind of short and pretty random as well. Work on putting in a storyline and this will be better.

[Zelda: Link of Gold ep. 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like how you added the new intro to this. The music was good, but I think it was a bit too long for an intro. The graphics are better in this movie, you put some more detail in to the drawings.

^^Needs Improving^^
My big thing about this is that it doesn't have anything to do with the previous episodes. This one takes place twenty years later, in fact, which doesn't make much sense to me. Like I said already, the intro was way too long as well.

[Dailytoon #237]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked Taylor's part. Very nice drawings, shading, and animation. Even though the storyline didn't really develop much, it was still the best part in this. The_Soul_Man's part was kind of humorous as well, I liked the music.

^^Needs Improving^^
Adam Ant's part was just terrible, and I think it's pretty obvious as to why it is terrible. Curial's part is just something that he submitted to the portal and got blammed. It's still crap.

[Zelda: Link of Gold ep. 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the storyline developing is decent. It's not very original and has a ton of holes, but it's ok. I like how you animated a lot more in this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
You still need to add a ton of animations, just subtle stuff to bring out some more details. Like I said, the storyline has a lot of holes, like why was the first triforce just sitting in the middle of the field? and why would link just give it away if he suspected it might have been triforce? Not to mention that the storyline is really predictable.

[Zelda: Link of Gold ep. 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
The storyline isn't so bad in this movie, and you ended in a good spot...I think that this is good enough that I will watch the next episode after this. The gradients you used were actually pretty tasteful too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't animate much at all. Your characters' facial expressions didn't change too much, and they could have easily been changed, especially since you even describe their emotion in the text. Also, the music could be a lot better. How about some Zelda music?

[Jackass -REMAKE - Preview]

K

^^Good Points^^
I gave you a one for sound because of the background music. It's kind of cool how you made the beginning just like the real show.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's completely unecessary to have Microsoft Sam read the entire introductions, especially since there are a total of two stunds. I think it took longer for him to read that than it did to watch the actual movie, which was not that interesting. They did the shopping cart stunt in the show, you just added some blood, and the night dive stunt is just plain stupid. The play button is too hard to press, this is too short, and the music doesn't cut off at the end.

[Sex in Church]

K

^^Good Points^^
It is pretty funny how you poked fun at priests and their business with little boys. That's always funny, and the end joke was mildly funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should have done voice overs or something, because it is really annoying to have to read all that text. The drawings were awful, seriously, it was stick figures that weren't animated at all or really have any features that a five year old couldn't imagine up.

[Why Me?]

K

^^Good Points^^
Basically everything after the suicide scene was pretty funny. I liked the ad for rofflebars the most, that was pretty humorous, and the scene after that was pretty funny with lines like "stop playing with those entertaining mattel toys".

^^Needs Improving^^
The suicide scene is pretty stupid. It was very funny at all. The graphics throughout this were pretty bad actually. You didn't really animate a whole lot, and your drawings were mostly circles, accompanied by pictures for backgrounds.

["Turd of the Week"]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very true movie you made. I'm not a fan of these movies, so any satire against them is cool by me. I liked the many sound effects you put into this, they were great and the directions were kind of funny, like "the furrier the better!" was humorous. Overall, good job, and it needed to be said in a professional manner like this.

^^Needs Improving^^
It would have been a lot funnier if you had read off the instructions in some kind of jerky-type voice over and maybe added some more harsh comments about the series, but still well done.

KKyuubi responds:

I was trying to get this done ASAP, so there may have been some things I left out, but in the special Clock Day edition I happen to be planning, it will be narrated by StrawberryClock.