FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Genocide Inc. Episode 01]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok the storyline in this movie was pretty good. I like how you put in a bunch of pictures of certain stuff you were talking about, like the dead rat and the hand signals. Some of the music choices were good, basically everything aside from Jungle Boogie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations in this movie were really quite boring. You used the same simple animations over and over again.

Blaklyon responds:

I agree with you in every area you point out but remember, I this was the first flash animation I ever did. If you watch my later works, you will see where I inproved on some stuff. I was thinking about redoing this animation with better sound and better graphics. Thanks for the review!

[Infantry End of the world]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty good overall. Some scenes in this, pretty much everything after the missile launch sequence looked pretty good. I'm not sure whether you drew most of the stuff or if they are sprites, but either way, the graphics are pretty good in this. This movie gave a good feel for the game and what it was like, and overall was pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Before the missile launch sequence, everything was pretty poorly done. You had a lot of pretty poor drawings and poor sprite manipulation, and you used a lot of the same sound effects over and over again.

[Dailytoon #238]

K

^^Good Points^^
This seems to be the daily toon that no one likes, so of course it is one that I actually found pretty good. All parts of this were good in their own way. I liked the music in Retrosmash's part and TPOTEOZ's, Fwenchmaid's and Cruzh's parts were all very funny. I liked the toof parodies in this, and wade's voice was just hilarious, as was the animation of his mouth. Funny stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like the loud barney bunch style fart in Cruzh's part of this, and TPOTEOZ's part was just a little too long and was very hard to hear.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

hehe well glad you liked it

[The Truth Of It All]

K

^^Good Points^^
It is kind of a funny idea of evil squirrels controlling everything.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is just a collection of poorly drawn images of people in different stages of life, and what the squirrels had to do with anything is kind of irrelevant. The pictures weren't drawn very well, and your squirrel pictures were pretty poorly edited.

[Jimmy in Pursuit]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought the drawings actually weren't that bad. You did some cool reflecting for shading if that makes and sense. The music was also pretty cool, and I like how you went right into the credits at the end.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't have a very good storyline, or really any development in storyline. Kind of short and pretty random as well. Work on putting in a storyline and this will be better.

[Zelda: Link of Gold ep. 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like how you added the new intro to this. The music was good, but I think it was a bit too long for an intro. The graphics are better in this movie, you put some more detail in to the drawings.

^^Needs Improving^^
My big thing about this is that it doesn't have anything to do with the previous episodes. This one takes place twenty years later, in fact, which doesn't make much sense to me. Like I said already, the intro was way too long as well.

[Dailytoon #237]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked Taylor's part. Very nice drawings, shading, and animation. Even though the storyline didn't really develop much, it was still the best part in this. The_Soul_Man's part was kind of humorous as well, I liked the music.

^^Needs Improving^^
Adam Ant's part was just terrible, and I think it's pretty obvious as to why it is terrible. Curial's part is just something that he submitted to the portal and got blammed. It's still crap.

[Zelda: Link of Gold ep. 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the storyline developing is decent. It's not very original and has a ton of holes, but it's ok. I like how you animated a lot more in this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
You still need to add a ton of animations, just subtle stuff to bring out some more details. Like I said, the storyline has a lot of holes, like why was the first triforce just sitting in the middle of the field? and why would link just give it away if he suspected it might have been triforce? Not to mention that the storyline is really predictable.

[Zelda: Link of Gold ep. 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
The storyline isn't so bad in this movie, and you ended in a good spot...I think that this is good enough that I will watch the next episode after this. The gradients you used were actually pretty tasteful too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't animate much at all. Your characters' facial expressions didn't change too much, and they could have easily been changed, especially since you even describe their emotion in the text. Also, the music could be a lot better. How about some Zelda music?

[Jackass -REMAKE - Preview]

K

^^Good Points^^
I gave you a one for sound because of the background music. It's kind of cool how you made the beginning just like the real show.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's completely unecessary to have Microsoft Sam read the entire introductions, especially since there are a total of two stunds. I think it took longer for him to read that than it did to watch the actual movie, which was not that interesting. They did the shopping cart stunt in the show, you just added some blood, and the night dive stunt is just plain stupid. The play button is too hard to press, this is too short, and the music doesn't cut off at the end.