FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Event Flux]

Randomness...

^^Good Points^^
It's definitely better than most random animations made, and there were some creative transitions like the smiley face to parachute. The animations were smooth and the music was catchy as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like X said in his review, the black and white is just bland. You should add some colors, and if not that than atleast some shading.

[Boredom Battle]

An epic movie

^^Good Points^^
I'm glad that I discovered your work here on NG, they are truly fun to watch. The animations were, for the most part, excellent. The storyline is likewise excellent and is very creative. It made me laugh a little and definitely made me smile a lot. The sound was a good choice as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I could recommend is to work on the drawings a little bit. I don't really care for how the main character is drawn as well as some other things, like the grass. Other than that, excellent!

[OMG run]

EXPAND NOW!

^^Good Points^^
Immediately when I opened this movie I saw the wonderful preloader. Loved the animation in the preloader and the drawing. The graphics are very impressive, smooth animations and very good drawings. The sound was a good choice and it's pretty entertaining to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seeing this little piece of flash, I want more. I want you to make this into a full length movie, I'm sure if it had a good storyline, it would go damn far. Good luck in the future.

joemama413 responds:

I'm always getting that. I'll try for full length next time. Thanks for the nice comments and helpful insight

[Somali TV 3]

Whatever...

^^Good Points^^
The drawings are pretty good and I like the style of animation. Some of the music is alright.

^^Needs Improving^^
This got really repetitive as it went on...I wasn't really entertained by it. Next time work on adding some storyline and point.

[Starwell ep3: the JOB!]

Another good episode!

^^Good Points^^
Once again, your graphical skills are obviously very high. The shading and drawings are very good, I was especially impressed with the agent drawing. The voice overs, especially Agent Smith's sounded very accurate and were very clear. The storyline was good, and quite funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like the fact that the movie started automatically, needs a play button, and the end needs a replay button. Other than that, just keep coming up with fresh ideas.

[Starwell ep4: Tired]

Not bad.

^^Good Points^^
I am new to this series and since this is the first installment I have watched, it made a good impression on me. It was short, sweet and to the point. I liked the sun scene, it was quite funny. Very nice drawings, and the animations were fair. I liked the voice overs too. Very clear and varying between each character.

^^Needs Improving^^
The ending needs a replay button or something to tell the viewer the movie is over. The animation could use a little bit of fine tuning, but it's not a big deal.

[Android X-19]

A worthwhile movie!

^^Good Points^^
In this movie I see some of the best graphics I have seen lately in any flash movie. The shading is superior and drawings are bar none. The sound was also a strong point. The sound effects were defined and the music went well with the mood of the storyline. The storyline itself was flawed but still very good.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie developed way too slowly for my tastes. In the beginning I even started to lose interest and it didn't get good until the very end.

Creative-Brain responds:

yeah you are right well maybe next time i'll do better thank you.

[Star Wars As It Should Be]

Very Funny!

^^Good Points^^
This slideshow thing was hella funny, you had a great script from beginning to end. The pictures were pretty high quality, and I liked how you can set the pictures to auto play or change them yourself. I can't believe how long this was either!

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing bad about this flash is that after a while, even though it is funny, it gets a little boring without any animation or sound.