FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Building]

K

^^Good Points^^
Interesting topic for a collab, I quite liked the way this was just a big scrolling building, great idea. I thought that the flow was very interesting and the speed was nice too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The art wasn't particularly great in this. There were a lot of lack luster art in this collab. I think I should try out one of these.

[Pumpking Glock Collection]

K

^^Good Points^^
Some parts of this were pretty funny. I liked Ghetto Dog's and Emo Reviewer's as well. Both of those offered the most entertainment and comedy.

^^Needs Improving^^
The other two parts were not quite as good and brought the whole thing down. They weren't nearly as funny and I was kind of disappointed by those two.

[WOS TT 4]

K

^^Good Points^^
Always nice to see a collab by the WOS, as they are always pretty entertaining. I liked the short intro to this, and the panda theme was strange, but was also unique to this. I have to say that Arskagarf's part was the best that I saw, and ZP's part came in a close second.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not up to par with the other TT's however. This one had fewer parts, and few parts were done by original members, which I think is most disappointing. A few spammy artists in here, which I don't really like either.

[GG-SCARECROW!!!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Never actually saw a glock use its face as a weapon, which would make sense. Interesting. The storyline in this was kind of interesting, though very strange. I liked the graphics, they were actually somewhat detailed.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline doesn't really develop at all in the ten seconds that the movie lasts. You could have gone into some background so that this made some sense at all.

[Glock Group Owns Colab]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not too terrible. Some parts of this had decent graphics with pretty detailed drawings and decent animations. I liked the music in this as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lot of the parts of this were pretty poor quality. Also, nothing really developed as far as storyline goes, which was rather disappointing.

[Joey's First Car]

K

^^Good Points^^
The idea of this movie was really funny. I liked the transformers joke in this, it was rather unexpected. The animations in this were really unique, as they were realistic at all. The camera movements and the blurring was life-like.

^^Needs Improving^^
Didn't really like the length of this. I was really hoping that this would have continued at least a little bit more. It sort of ended in an odd spot.

[omg kiwi]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, that was actually quite interesting. It was rather funny to see kiwi characters running around, as well as the dogs. I had to say the sound effects were kind of cool. Reminds me of BBQBeefburgerman.

^^Needs Improving^^
I couldn't hear a word of what was being said. The volume definitely needs to be improved a bit, or perhaps subtitles or something. Also, didn't like the image for the background, which is just laziness on your part.

[Pico Speed Sketch]

K

^^Good Points^^
These things are usually pretty cool, and it seems like you've had some experience making these, as it was very well made. The change throughout each frame, which had to be at least a hundred, was very uniform, creating a smooth looking animation.

^^Needs Improving^^
The lighting did change a bit throughout, which was kind of annoying, and could have been easily avoided.

M4KBOT responds:

Thanks for the review.

The light variations were caused because every time I went to draw a line and moved my hand back, the light would change and only go back after about 3 - 5 seconds. Considering there was about 800 frames in the movie, I wasn't always prepared to wait 5 seconds, so thats why. But one helpful reviewer told me how to get the light balance write, so it is more or less fixed now.