FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Metal Gear Toast 3]

XD

^^Good Points^^
Another very funny episode in this series. The random adventures of Snake continue in this series with more great randome humor that makes no sense yet seems to satisfy nonetheless. I loved the facial expressions you used, they seemed very strange but they made me laugh. The voice overs sounded just like Snake. Just about everything in this movie made me laugh and I really liked this.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only really obvious thing to improve would be the graphics. Your drawings are pretty below average as are the animations.

[NINGA death squad (part 1]

Rubbish is right

^^Good Points^^
I'm to tired to think this hard...

^^Needs Improving^^
You used poorly drawn stick figures that can hardly be called animated. Neither their arms nor legs moved at all, nor did anything else unless their whole body was moving with it. I hated how you made the music yourself by humming or singing or whatever shit you did. The ending was lame too. Just shows you don't have the skill to animate a normal fight scene.

[God Dammit]

Not good at all

^^Good Points^^
Aparently, some people find this to be good for a cheap laugh, but I found otherwise.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think this is pretty obvious. Your drawings are terrible and there is almost no animation in this besides some simple movements up and down and the piss pile getting bigger. I hated how you just stuck in a weird picture of yourself or whoever into this to symbolize a mad character.

[Blockhead: Episode 7]

Another excellent episode!

^^Good Points^^
What can I say? This is Blockhead, I don't see how it could not be a good movie. As always, your voice overs are excellent, I love the carefree voice of Blockhead and the disgruntled and frustrated voice of Conscience. The intro scene is pretty funny, reminds me of that one episode of the Three Stooges, "Disorder in the Court". The main movie had a great storyline with lots of funny parts in it and I thoroughly enjoyed watching this movie. Keep up the excellent work!

^^Needs Improving^^
Umm...It's Blockhead! Nothing's wrong with that.

[Ghost Motel 3]

Yeah, this is good

^^Good Points^^
Episode three turns out to be a sucess just as episode two did, no surprise. The storyline developed a little more and is becoming pretty ineteresting. I'm starting to like the voice overs a bit more as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This episode isn't nearly as interactive as the other two episodes were, and there weren't any wrong options you could choose during this. This could also stand the addition of some more sound effects. Just simple stuff, like the taxi door closing or car noises in the street. Just something to spice it up a little bit.

[BonusStage:TheLostEpisode]

Good stuff

^^Good Points^^
Another very good movie! The voice overs are definitely the best part in this movie, they are very clear and distinct for you characters. The musical choices you used gave this a ten for sound. I liked the drawigns a lot as well, some of the odd shapes you used for bodies were pretty humorous, and your graphics were consitently well drawn, shaded and animated. The storyline is funny and there are lots of points where I had a good laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
Now that you mention it, the humor does seem a little too forced, it seems like the whole LAN party scene was too similar to the crappy humor found in Family Guy, where everything is very deliberate and sounds like the character is trying to be funny to the audience, which is not what cartoon humor should be.

[Dendyn Dynasties]

Wow, that was amazing ^_^

^^Good Points^^
This movie was done very well to say the least. I was intruiged in the beginning and thought this would have a very deep storyline, until I got to the "Magic Tumour" part, where I knew this was going to be hilarious. As soon as the fighting begins, we see your amazing talent in animating and drawing. Seriously, this has to be the best graphics I've seen to date. This looks like an actual broadcast anime television show, with the constantly changing angles and extremely smooth animations. The fighting was very intense because of the music and the amazing animations. I'm very impressed by this work and cannot wait for part two! Excellent job man!

^^Needs Improving^^
This didn't really introduce the characters too well besides the tumour guy, but who needs to build characters when you've got so much furry action!

[Ghost Motel 2]

Better

^^Good Points^^
I was delighted to find that you didn't have some crappy screamer for an ending this time, which was a relief. The music once again, is a good choice. This has a much better storyline because we find out more about this world and the conflict that is going to be facing our main character.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sometimes the drawings were not very good. The most notable place, which I'm sure you've herad in just about ever review is the dead body. The voice overs, while they aren't done poorly, just have a lot of static and are very low quality.

Violet-AIM responds:

Yeah we try and work on the voices better for each one, they do get slighty better, thanks for the nice review.

[The Enchanted Sword 1]

Not a bad start

^^Good Points^^
Once again, you have made some great fight scenes in this movie and I'm pretty impressed with how they turned out. The animations are very good and very smooth. The music also went along well with the ninja theme.

^^Needs Improving^^
You don't really give us much of a storyline, which would have made a lot more sense. Right now this seems like just another show of your skills in making fight scenes.

ThorKingOfTheVikings responds:

I disagree with less storyline, but I guess it needs to be explained, once I get my batting average up from these nooby submissions you will see ;)