FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Star Wars:Expendable Sith]

Nice, but could use some things.

The idea for this flash is an awesome one. This was very funny and had a good script, but you could have done a few more sith before Maul. The graphics were well drawn and animated, your zooming skills are bar none, and your drawing skills are good too. The voice overs were good, but the emperors could have been a little more raspy(I know it's hard to do though). The end was pretty funny, gave me a good chuckle how the emperor zapped his new apprentice.

By the way, Grievous was never Palpatine's apprentice, he was merely general to the CIS. His lightsabers were actually those of Jedi he killed in the past (he keeps them), not ones that he crafted himself.

[Section 1-36]

Pretty bad.

The script was pretty funny, but it doesn't require a flash to be made just for it, and one without any real animation at that. This needs to be in a flash, but not a flash focused around it. This was mildly funny, but you really disappointed me with this one albino :'(

AlbinoClock responds:

Of course it disappointed you. It's not your style, babycakes. Your favorite flash content includes all serious movies. You have both episodes of There She Is on it, as well as Eskimo Bob and Brackenwood stuff. Mind you, I love Brackenwood, but it's very far from the genre of this movie.

Now, if you had some old Clock movies or some Star Syndicate stuff in your favorites, I'd be surprised. As far as this flash goes, you're part of the audience that was supposed to be annoyed, apparently.

[Final Xenon Saga 3]

Well that was ridiculous.

Final Xenon Saga sounds like such a cool name for a flash series and I would have thought this was going to be a lot better than it actually was. The storyline was pretty stupid and didn't make a whole lot of sense and it was way too short. However, being that this movie is just so terrible, I guess the fact that it's short is good. The graphics are terrible...I don't even need to explain why. The sound was very low quality. I'm very surprised this even passed judgement.

[Final Fantasy 7 DEMO]

Not much of a movie.

While I like the idea of making a flash series based on FF7, this movie didn't really have much of a storyline that gave us any idea what this series is going to be about. All we know is a girl is living in a city. The graphics were pretty good...the city was pretty well detailed. The sound was well chosen too. This is more of a trailer than anything else, hopefully the next episodes will have more storyline to them.

[Fat GIrls on Bicycles]

Now this is a music video!

The choice of song to make a flash movie out of is great in this flash. That is one crazy song and I think your friend definitely has some talent. The graphics were great, though the girl was a little disturbing. The song itself didn't really give you a solid storyline to stick to, so I like how you were creative with most parts. I just don't know what to say about this movie...the music is great and the storyline and graphics are great, this was an awesome concept...Nice job!

[Steps to Salvation]

Weird...but good!

The title would suggest that the movie is much different than it actually is, but the preloader screen explains it all. This was a nice touch instead of putting the story in the movie itself. The story was kind of weird but it was fascinating and well displayed in the movie. The graphics were well done, nice animations and unique. The music was very good, I liked how you changed it from time to time, each time it went great with the movie. Great stuff!

[Ghost Out Part 2]

Riveting!

Wow, this series is coming along quite nicely! This feels like watching a full length movie the way it progresses. The graphics were very professionally done. The camera angles were bar none, like the zooming in you did and the angle when he opens the door. Animations were pretty smooth, I liked how you stayed away from coloring. Voice overs were well done...I really like how the character narrates the story. The storyline itself is just awesome and is very intruiging. I will definitely view the next episode when it is released.

[Luigi's Lunchbreak]

Not too bad.

I'm not exactly sure why you called this movie "Luigi's Lunchbreak" since it really didn't have a main theme and definitely not one surrounding lunch. Nonetheless, the movie was pretty well done. The backgrounds were good, but at some points the sprites weren't that well animated, but still very good for your first submission. I didn't really like the voice overs in the first part, you should definitely stick to their regular voices. One suggestion I do have if you do something like this again in the future is to put some kind of menu to each section with a little picture from each part as a button. Adding menus like that will really bolster your score. Other than that, the movie was a nice length, the sections were nice and short and there were quite a few of them, so nice job.

[Belligerence]

Great use of sprites!

I've seen my fair share of sprite movies since I've been on NG, but this one was very complex compared to the other ones. The graphics were very good. Animations were smooth, and the constant movement of the sprites shows that you really put a good amount of time and effort into this. The sound was good, but some of the sound effects were low quality. For example in the beginning when the guy asks if the other heard a bomb, I had no idea that said sound was supposed to be a bomb. The storyline was great. It's an awesome concept and was well developed and played out. I liked how you introduced the title to the movie after it played for a while. This movie was a good length and is worth watching.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Thx dude you rock my socks.