FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dark Who? Part 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I guess you put some effort into this. Pretty much everything in it was pretty average, nothing too special though.

^^Needs Improving^^
First thing is the voice acting. Some is louder than others, which is annoying, and everything is very grainy when it plays. The storyline wasn't really that interesting or creative, very run of the mill. And please don't gradient fill darky kirby. Or at least not like you did in this.

InfinateLoop responds:

Yeah, we'll fix that in the next episode. This was just an introduction.

[Mickey D's]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, this was very well done and pretty entertaining. I too have never liked the McDonalds commercial, or their giant food servings, so I thought this was a pretty funny parody. "Big motherf***er" yeah that's about how it goes. The graphics were pretty cool, mainly because of the great animations. Also loved the voice acting, very cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought you could have went with the whole fattening thing a little more in this, but still a very funny movie.

[Palz - Episode 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, good voice acting, which was probably about the best part in this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, the graphics weren't that good. Your drawings were lack luster and there was hardly any animation in here to make up for it either. I felt that the storyline didn't help either. It was kind of humorous, but really the ending was just not very creative.

[Cling]

K

^^Good Points^^
Really a neat movie. FBF movies have kind of moved on, but this one was truly of high quality. The animations are extremely smooth and very interesting to watch. I loved how everything just turned into random object and kept transforming. Very cool animation.

^^Needs Improving^^
It wasn't at all synced to the music, which is what really makes these random FBF movies interesting to me.

[Look out below]

K

^^Good Points^^
Graphics were pretty good. The drawings were proportional and the animations were very smooth. Not sure what the hell happened at the end, but it made me laugh when I watched it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how this is set up with the preloader and such. It's not a very nice looking play button, and just having it loop back to it doesn't really do it for me. A replay button would be better, along with a dedicated preloader screen.

[Gunman gets ruthless]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well the graphics were pretty good considering there wasn't much coloring or background work. I liked the slight movements in your images, which gave it a more interesting look. Animations was pretty good and you drew some good blood as well. The music was pretty cool, went well with this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not very long at all, but besides that I think you could have made this a lot longer and added a storyline to it. You've got some graphical talent, but you really didn't do much with it here.

[CorpseGrinder's Dream]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hmm...I never thought of CorpseGrinder actually losing his corpse, so this was an interesting idea. I definitely think that the music and the abstract graphics really did make this feel like a dream. The drawings and animations were top notch, great stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little shorter than I had expected it to be, but other than that pretty solid job here.

[Animator vs. Animation II]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely a great movie by you, no surprise. The animations were very smooth with lots of realism in them as well. I really liked how this episode spread more throughout the whole computer and used a lot more that just Flash. Having AIM chats and fighting with different icons is a very cool idea. The ending was pretty creative as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some parts throughout this just seemed anti-climactic like something was missing.