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[Tom Vs. Wade]

Heh

^^Good Points^^
Surprisingly, I found this to be a bit humorous. The jokes like "that's about as likely as me getting married" are ironic and still funny. I like how you subtlely make fun of each character.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are aweful. You drawings are very poor, and just copy/paste jobs and there are really no animations except for very slow movement of characters. There was no sound and sometimes the text went away way too quickly to read. Other times it seemed like the movie just stopped playing because of how slow this moved.

[Art]

This is not art!

^^Good Points^^
Unfortunately, nothing really was great about this movie. I kind of appreciate the randomness of it, and find it funny what can come out of a person's head when they are bored though.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is just a bunch of random drawings and a bunch of random pictures added to this. Most of this you didn't animate at all, and the music was horrible, though it is a pretty rare occurence in flash movies.

[Orayu X Trailer(Fix)]

Neato

^^Good Points^^
This is good enough to make me want to watch the two episodes you made of this, which is what I will do after writing this review. I really liked the music. It set an old-world type mood, with some mystery and exitement mixed into it. The storyline seems very good and I am quite interested to see what is going to happen in this series.

^^Good Points^^
The weakest part about this movie is the graphics. I didn't like the way you used real-life pictures, like that of the sun, it would have been better if you had drawn such things out. The animations also weren't that good and can use a bunch of improving.

[Technology Today Episode1]

I'm looking forward to a sequel

^^Good Points^^
Well, I will definitely be looking out for a second episode of this series, since this one is pretty promising. I thought the trance music was very cool, and the voice overs were done well. The animations were pretty good as well. I liked the storyline and the great humor. I laughed a few times at this, which is more than most movies. Good job.

^^Needs Improving^^
There were a few minor spelling mistakes. I didn't really like your drawings either. They just seemed really strange to me, but your animations made up for the drawings.

DrClay responds:

i always kinda drew like that.
so wat if they may seem a little strange.
to me they done seem strange at all.
every flash author draw stuff in his or her own way.

its true
look around sometimes and you will see that everyone makes their flash differently.
and i dont mean just by ideas.
everyone's Character is drawn in the authors own way.

and these characters were drawn in my own way.

[Boners Avenger 2]

Swell!

^^Good Points^^
When this movie first started I was a little weary and didn't quite like it, but as it went on, it sort of grew on me and I kind of enjoyed it. The music was a good choice, and the randomness was pretty funny. It was much more interesting than the last episode in the series, but it still had some funny reviews in it. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like about the first minute of this, and that is about all.

Starberry responds:

z too bad you didnt find the secret joke!