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[NGArmy/Clay v Stick short]

A fun combination

^^Good Points^^
I thought that the game was pretty entertaining. It's a simple game, yet it's still fun to play for a little while. It's challenging to reach the max score, which is always changing, and the graphics in the game are very good, as well as the sound effects. In the movie, I liked how you added a stick figure into your movie instead of doing everything with flash. That was a cool combination. I liked your voice overs and music, and also the play bar at the bottom is a nice addition.

^^Needs Improving^^
In the movie, your animating isn't that great. You should try to make more frames or something, because the animation seems very slow.

[Soldier's Eyes: Vietnam]

Not cool

Even if you had made a real movie about soldiers, it still would not have been good because the intro bored me to hell. Then after the intro you have this poorly drawn scene of who knows what, and basically it's all just mocking the people who fought in Vietnam in my eyes, which is not very cool. This movie has no storyline and has little effort put into it.

[The Gun II]

Better...

^^Good Points^^
Thank Guthix you didn't revert back to something like that odd stick figure scene at the end of the last movie. This movie had decent drawings and decent animations, much better than I am capable of.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, since the end of the last movie was so odd and really hard to follow, I'm not quite sure where this movie is supposed to start, so this kid getting shot doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me. This was also really short as well.

[The Gun]

HAHAHA

^^Good Points^^
I can't think of anything to say besides that title up there. I mean, this was looking to be a good movie when it started. The drawings were decent, the effects were nice, but once that weird fight scene came in, this went downhill, but I couldn't help buy laughing at that part.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah...that fight scene was like...FTW!?! It was kind of funny, but it's just so weird and poorly done. I mean, you put the guy's face as a rainbow!

[Blind Date]

I lol'd

^^Good Points^^
Once you get past the poor graphics, this movie isn't half bad at all. The voice overs are funny, and the character designs are funny as well. I thought this was pretty funny and you obviously had fun making it as I can see from the clips at the end, which is all that really matters. That section was funny and I'm glad you put it in.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said, the graphics are pretty bad. You didn't animate too much at all, and the drawings weren't good either.

[Fake Virus Screenie]

Could be fun.

^^Good Points^^
I like the idea of making this into a screensaver and tricking some people with it, that would be quite funny. This is pretty well done, and for a rather nieve viewer, this could potentially look like a virus.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I can think to point out is that you should have made the resolution on your movie a little bigger, to make this version a little more believable and easier to read.

[O R A N G E]

k...

^^Good Points^^
For what was offered in this movie, I thought it was a good length. A short, quick smile in this one, but not worth getting excited about. This had some humor and some decent animations as well. Don't know how the second part led out of this, but anyway, not a bad job. Better than I could do.

^^Needs Improving^^
Err...this was just a little too random for me to like.

[ORANGE 2]

Pretty funny

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty funny movie. This rock character is quite a funny guy. I like how you used Speakonia for the voices. It's really awkward to see it used in something other than Clock/Glock/Lock movies, so this is pretty refreshing. The storyline was kind of random, but I still laughed at it. Animations were good as well, and the drawings weren't bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use some compression, definitely. Shouldn't be more than a couple hundred kb. Also, the lip syncing seems to be off in some spots.

[Halloween Slide Show]

Cool

^^Good Points^^
The drawings themselves that you made are very unique. They are all very good drawings and have lots of detail, shading, and look great overall. I liked the Haloween style background, and Zombie Breadfruit is my favorite part of this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Perhaps some Haloween type music or sound effects to go along with each pictures or just for the whole flash. Without sounds, this just doesn't seem too haloween-esque.