FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Technology Today Episode1]

I'm looking forward to a sequel

^^Good Points^^
Well, I will definitely be looking out for a second episode of this series, since this one is pretty promising. I thought the trance music was very cool, and the voice overs were done well. The animations were pretty good as well. I liked the storyline and the great humor. I laughed a few times at this, which is more than most movies. Good job.

^^Needs Improving^^
There were a few minor spelling mistakes. I didn't really like your drawings either. They just seemed really strange to me, but your animations made up for the drawings.

DrClay responds:

i always kinda drew like that.
so wat if they may seem a little strange.
to me they done seem strange at all.
every flash author draw stuff in his or her own way.

its true
look around sometimes and you will see that everyone makes their flash differently.
and i dont mean just by ideas.
everyone's Character is drawn in the authors own way.

and these characters were drawn in my own way.

[Boners Avenger 2]

Swell!

^^Good Points^^
When this movie first started I was a little weary and didn't quite like it, but as it went on, it sort of grew on me and I kind of enjoyed it. The music was a good choice, and the randomness was pretty funny. It was much more interesting than the last episode in the series, but it still had some funny reviews in it. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like about the first minute of this, and that is about all.

Starberry responds:

z too bad you didnt find the secret joke!

[Boners Avenger]

Good times...

^^Good Points^^
First off, I'd like to say that D-Code is one of the most awesome songs of all time, good job on using in this submission. Next, I'd like to say that this was very funny. Reading abusive reviews is always funny, and seeing them over and over the funny just keeps building. I thought it was funny how you pointed out KWAS in this, he really sucks. I had some definite fun watching this, nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was pretty fast paced, making some stuff hard to read, and after a while, this got a little bit boring. What would have been better is if you had taken less reviews and put your own commentary in about them. That usually seems to work best with these.

Starberry responds:

yeah i didnt do any commentary but i would have just used speakonia anyway so :/

[A Side Of Stupidity]

Kind of stupid

^^Good Points^^
In parts of this the drawings were pretty good. The background was drawn well and the guy on the couch was drawn well, as well as the penguin. I liked your voice overs too. The accent sounded natural, and foreign people always make things funnier!

^^Needs Improving^^
The guy who said he had a penguin is drawn horribly compared to your other characters. I'm not sure what happened, but this looks pretty bad. The randomness in this isn't very funny to me. It gave me a little smile, but it's just too random.

IMMonkey responds:

While I agree with your comments, I think you were a little harsh with your scoring.

[RupeeClock gets aids!!]

Meh.

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were good in the beginning. I found that whole scene to be quite funny, but after that this movie went downhill.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline was kind of weird. I don't see Rupee getting AIDS at all, or really anything to do with Rupee. The drawings after the first scene were pretty shoddy for the most part, and the sound effects were really loud and sudden. I was expecting this to be better since RupeeClock is in the title.

ShitlordCentral responds:

Didn't you watch it omg he got aids because no-one liked him.

Poor Rupee =(

[Al gore meets Bart]

Not bad

^^Good Points^^
My favorite part about this was the music. The way you mixed Al Gore's voice into that great Simpson's song was genius. Very well done. I also liked your drawing of Flanders, that was quite funny. I also thought the preloader had a funny drawing on it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the drawings. Your Bart Simpson just looks odd, and there really wasn't any animations besides him moving from side to side. The best part was the music, and nothing else was really that good at all.

[NGArmy/Clay v Stick short]

A fun combination

^^Good Points^^
I thought that the game was pretty entertaining. It's a simple game, yet it's still fun to play for a little while. It's challenging to reach the max score, which is always changing, and the graphics in the game are very good, as well as the sound effects. In the movie, I liked how you added a stick figure into your movie instead of doing everything with flash. That was a cool combination. I liked your voice overs and music, and also the play bar at the bottom is a nice addition.

^^Needs Improving^^
In the movie, your animating isn't that great. You should try to make more frames or something, because the animation seems very slow.

[Soldier's Eyes: Vietnam]

Not cool

Even if you had made a real movie about soldiers, it still would not have been good because the intro bored me to hell. Then after the intro you have this poorly drawn scene of who knows what, and basically it's all just mocking the people who fought in Vietnam in my eyes, which is not very cool. This movie has no storyline and has little effort put into it.

[The Gun II]

Better...

^^Good Points^^
Thank Guthix you didn't revert back to something like that odd stick figure scene at the end of the last movie. This movie had decent drawings and decent animations, much better than I am capable of.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, since the end of the last movie was so odd and really hard to follow, I'm not quite sure where this movie is supposed to start, so this kid getting shot doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me. This was also really short as well.

[The Gun]

HAHAHA

^^Good Points^^
I can't think of anything to say besides that title up there. I mean, this was looking to be a good movie when it started. The drawings were decent, the effects were nice, but once that weird fight scene came in, this went downhill, but I couldn't help buy laughing at that part.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah...that fight scene was like...FTW!?! It was kind of funny, but it's just so weird and poorly done. I mean, you put the guy's face as a rainbow!