FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The New Potato Commercial]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not really that bad. It was kind of random, but it was still pretty funny, as it was about potatoes being the next corn...whatever that means. I got a bit of entertainment out of it in any case.

^^Needs Improving^^
The lip syncing in the beginning is really off and drags on longer than the actual sound clip. Animations weren't amazing either. Also, needs a replay button. I don't like it when a movie just starts and loops.

Luchastyle responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah, it's basically the start of a smear campaign against corn. it's supposed to be strange and off beat. i was gonna do more. but this one wasn't that good. made i will do more in the future.

[Makedamnsure Music Video.]

K

^^Good Points^^
Looks like you have some skill in animating. I saw the Mario/Luigi singing scenes, and they looked pretty well made with the voicing and such. Need to distribute that throughout your movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seemed more like just a random compilation of sprites put to some music rather than an actual music video. It had nothing to do with the song, other then when Mario and Luigi were singing.

[uoyuo]

K

^^Good Points^^
I didn't think it was really that bad. I thought the way the images looked was pretty cool. They weren't really low quality, and looked pretty cool when you added some animation to them. A very abstract piece, but that just makes it more interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lot of it doesn't appear to be your artwork or your photos, which is kind of lame, as this is pretty much made completely out of said images.

[5 things i hate about CS]

K

^^Good Points^^
I actually can appreciate this, as I've experienced these same problems while playing Halo, Halo2, and Rainbow Six. I guess all of these problems are universal, but it's funny to see a movie such as this, outlining those problems.

^^Needs Improving^^
Mostly the graphics need improving. Using stick figures is fine, but you need to know how to animate them, which it doesn't appear you have mastered yet. So work on animating. Especially the ladder scene!

[2001 DBZ Tournament 4]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like the idea of making a Flash battle bracket and see who advances is each episode. I've seen it before, but still a cool idea to use. Music was pretty catchy as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
There is a lot wrong with this. For one, your framerate is very slow, and your animations are choppy and don't flow very well at all. I have to say that with a lack of sound effects and camera movement, this was very boring. The scene was zoomed out a bit, which didn't help either. Could use some better animation and more fighting as well.

[Lose It Mever: DC]

K

^^Good Points^^
The whole setup of this is rather interesting and strange. No bouncing was a rather strange thing to say in a tomb, but I guess stuff like that added to the interest of the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
If I'm not mistaking, there isn't really anything that leads of to what happens in this. Looks like a good scene, but with nothing surrounding it, it's not really all that interesting.

[Valentines party eps 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the song you used for this one. It was rather upbeat and added some entertainment. Parts of this movie were funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Everything in this looked rushed to me. The animations were very simple and didn't offer much of a look at a bunch of skill. Just looks to me like you have some decent drawing skill, which should lead to much better animations than what you have put in here.

[.J.]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty appropriate parody for Clock Day I say. Nice red text and white background :)

^^Needs Improving^^
The whole joke/parody of changing the letter rather than B is getting a bit old and overdone. It's done every clock day and doesn't really take much effort or time to do.