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[Ed, Edd, n' Eddy]

decent

^^Good Points^^
Well, I can like how you stuck to the theme show pretty tightly as I remember it. I also found it pretty humorous how you made Ed a banana. That was just funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The background looks terrible, and the animations aren't good either. You pretty much just moved the whole character and nothing individually in that character, which makes this look really unprofessional.

[Blind Date]

I lol'd

^^Good Points^^
Once you get past the poor graphics, this movie isn't half bad at all. The voice overs are funny, and the character designs are funny as well. I thought this was pretty funny and you obviously had fun making it as I can see from the clips at the end, which is all that really matters. That section was funny and I'm glad you put it in.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said, the graphics are pretty bad. You didn't animate too much at all, and the drawings weren't good either.

[Fake Virus Screenie]

Could be fun.

^^Good Points^^
I like the idea of making this into a screensaver and tricking some people with it, that would be quite funny. This is pretty well done, and for a rather nieve viewer, this could potentially look like a virus.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I can think to point out is that you should have made the resolution on your movie a little bigger, to make this version a little more believable and easier to read.

[O R A N G E]

k...

^^Good Points^^
For what was offered in this movie, I thought it was a good length. A short, quick smile in this one, but not worth getting excited about. This had some humor and some decent animations as well. Don't know how the second part led out of this, but anyway, not a bad job. Better than I could do.

^^Needs Improving^^
Err...this was just a little too random for me to like.

[ORANGE 2]

Pretty funny

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty funny movie. This rock character is quite a funny guy. I like how you used Speakonia for the voices. It's really awkward to see it used in something other than Clock/Glock/Lock movies, so this is pretty refreshing. The storyline was kind of random, but I still laughed at it. Animations were good as well, and the drawings weren't bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use some compression, definitely. Shouldn't be more than a couple hundred kb. Also, the lip syncing seems to be off in some spots.

[Halloween Slide Show]

Cool

^^Good Points^^
The drawings themselves that you made are very unique. They are all very good drawings and have lots of detail, shading, and look great overall. I liked the Haloween style background, and Zombie Breadfruit is my favorite part of this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Perhaps some Haloween type music or sound effects to go along with each pictures or just for the whole flash. Without sounds, this just doesn't seem too haloween-esque.

[MichealJackson Cow Fucker]

Poorly done.

Ok, so you wanted to poke fun at Michael Jacksong. That's fine. Maybe calling him a cow fucker isn't the best way to do it, but that's valid, you can do that. But the quality of this work is just horrible. Your "parts" are very poorly drawn and your animation is shoddy as well. This isn't funny at all, and it is mainly just disgusting. Work on the animation and drawings and maybe I would think this is better.

[Operation:Talibize]

Not my style

^^Good Points^^
Though this isn't my style of movie with all the random violence, I'll still say good things about it. The music was a good choice, though I don't like Slipknot, because of all the violence.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't draw your blood and gore very well, infact it was just plain poor. The animations were about the same. Looks like just some poorly done layering.

[Pimpvangelion 1]

Good stuff

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty fun movie. The graphics are very well done, especially the drawings. The car and the man that bought the boy were very well drawn and shaded. I liked the sound effects and voices as well, and the way you used your own drawings and video clips is cool. Storyline was funny, especially the ending.

^^Needs Improving^^
It would be nice if you would have finished this, though the ending is pretty solid.

[Final Extacy]

lol...

^^Good Points^^
That movie was definitely a unique piece. The humor was definitely there. The best part was when Gaylord appeared and when he fought them...hilarious. The music was good, and I loved the sound effects; they were quite funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't too good. Your animations were kind of sparse, especially during scenes with a lot of talking. Add some more animation in these parts.

We3dy responds:

Thanks for the review, and yeah, I know the animation was kind of sparse, which is something I'm going to fix in part two.