FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fake Virus Screenie]

Could be fun.

^^Good Points^^
I like the idea of making this into a screensaver and tricking some people with it, that would be quite funny. This is pretty well done, and for a rather nieve viewer, this could potentially look like a virus.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I can think to point out is that you should have made the resolution on your movie a little bigger, to make this version a little more believable and easier to read.

[O R A N G E]

k...

^^Good Points^^
For what was offered in this movie, I thought it was a good length. A short, quick smile in this one, but not worth getting excited about. This had some humor and some decent animations as well. Don't know how the second part led out of this, but anyway, not a bad job. Better than I could do.

^^Needs Improving^^
Err...this was just a little too random for me to like.

[ORANGE 2]

Pretty funny

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty funny movie. This rock character is quite a funny guy. I like how you used Speakonia for the voices. It's really awkward to see it used in something other than Clock/Glock/Lock movies, so this is pretty refreshing. The storyline was kind of random, but I still laughed at it. Animations were good as well, and the drawings weren't bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use some compression, definitely. Shouldn't be more than a couple hundred kb. Also, the lip syncing seems to be off in some spots.

[Halloween Slide Show]

Cool

^^Good Points^^
The drawings themselves that you made are very unique. They are all very good drawings and have lots of detail, shading, and look great overall. I liked the Haloween style background, and Zombie Breadfruit is my favorite part of this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Perhaps some Haloween type music or sound effects to go along with each pictures or just for the whole flash. Without sounds, this just doesn't seem too haloween-esque.

[Operation:Talibize]

Not my style

^^Good Points^^
Though this isn't my style of movie with all the random violence, I'll still say good things about it. The music was a good choice, though I don't like Slipknot, because of all the violence.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't draw your blood and gore very well, infact it was just plain poor. The animations were about the same. Looks like just some poorly done layering.

[Final Extacy]

lol...

^^Good Points^^
That movie was definitely a unique piece. The humor was definitely there. The best part was when Gaylord appeared and when he fought them...hilarious. The music was good, and I loved the sound effects; they were quite funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't too good. Your animations were kind of sparse, especially during scenes with a lot of talking. Add some more animation in these parts.

We3dy responds:

Thanks for the review, and yeah, I know the animation was kind of sparse, which is something I'm going to fix in part two.

[Tribute to Monks]

Funny, but short

^^Good Points^^
Monks...I assume you're talking about like D&D monks or something. I guess this is a good idea, though I've never heard of monks being that great. I thought this was funny though. The jokes were funny like "WTF are those?" and "Anything they touch explode". I just liked the general mood of this. It was very informative and very funny. I'll know to stay away from monks from now on.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seriously, this movie should be no bigger than 200kb in size, yet this turns out to be over 3MB...You should compress your music. The drawings weren't too good either, though I guess using the real pictures is better than you drawing them.

[When Grannys Go Bad!]

Can't even watch this...

I didn't watch this whole movie. I watched up until right after the first old lady stopped talking, and I feel no guilt in giving this movie a one for an overall score without watchign the whole thing. Your voice overs were what really made me stop watching this. They were just plain annoying, and weren't convincing at all. Next time, try not to scream into your microphone. The graphics were poor as well. Lines and circles for bodies and nothing more. You could have done so much to make this bearable for me.