FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Citi Identity Theft]

What's wrong with this??

^^Good Points^^
At a score of 0.98 I was expecting this to be a screamer or be seizurific or something like this, but really this wasn't bad at all. It's a good parody of the commercials (maybe that's why most people don't get it?) and I found it quite a humorous parody! The drawings were ok, and I liked your speakonia usage.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations weren't too good at all, since nothing really moved, but when there were animations, they were not well done. I don't see why you didn't expand on this a little more either.

[Arskagarf TT]

A good TT!

^^Good Points^^
It seems like a rare occurance for a TT on NG to be of high quality, however, this one seems to break the norm and is actually a good collab with lots of good parts to it. Arskagarf's part and Kelp's part were my two favorites, but each part was unique. For the most part they weren't just short, crappy loops, and some time was actually put into them. The W.O.S seems to be delivering good work every time!

^^Needs Improving^^
Um...there was one part, forget which one that was just a loop. Loops aren't very good in my opinion.

Arskagarf responds:

Rinoa's and Cannabis Clock's were both loops. I did like Rinoa's because of the fact that it shows Arskagarf with the world on a shank. You are right about how this turned out, it did seem to be quite better than most time trials you would come across. Thank you for another swell review.

[A day with a cactus part2]

LOL!

^^Good Points^^
This second edition is even better than the first one! The graphics were much better, which really helped me to get into this more and enjoy it more. I liked the voice overs and of course there was a ton of humor in this movie. Very good job on this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics could still use the most improving out of anything in this movie, but I guess it kind of characterizes the movie, so your still golden man.

kingofthecactus responds:

Yeah sorry, I suck at drawing.

[A day with a cactus part1]

Funny throughout

^^Good Points^^
This movie was definitely funny to watch. The best part was the wal-mart scene. I like how you made such mean references to the people of Wal-Mart and retarted people. It was still funny though, especially when the wheel chair dude ran over the ramp. Good times here, good times.

^^Needs Improving^^
Obviously the graphics are not very good at all. Your drawings are devoid of any detail or shading, and the pictures you took were poorly cropped and low detail. There was also very poor animations.

[How To Win Portal Awards]

Hmmm...

^^Good Points^^
I really liked the introduction to this. The music was really cool, and the animations were pretty well done as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is kind of like that movie "How to write reviews", which I'm sure you remember. This really didn't shed much light on how to win awards other than the obvious, like "make it really good" is kind of a given to win the daily feature. Sorry, but this doesn't really help me too much.

Frenzy responds:

Thanks for your review, first of all!

Also, now that I think about it, I guess this would be helpful to newcomers to Newgrounds who don't really know much about the site...

Once again, thanks for reviewing, any review is appreicated!

[edgardos adventures]

Pretty good.

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty good movie. Your drawings are above average compared to most things, and the simplistic animations get your point across, yet look well done. I liked the sound effects you used. They were perfect for a beach scene. I laughed at this even though it was random violence, and I'm looking forward to watching some episodes in the future.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sure, this was short, but I still think it was a little too drawn out. It seems like you stalled in certain parts to lenghten this a bit.

[homer.swf]

lol...

^^Good Points^^
This is definitely a...unique piece. The randomness was kind of funny at points. The ending was also hilarious. It made no sense, but this was funny. I liked the sound effects and music you used as well. Funny stuff here, I think.

^^Needs Improving^^
Kind of short, I think. I would have liked to see a lot more of this random stuff. I didn't like the first part either, the music is just disturbing.

[MaCW: Something]

Heh

^^Good Points^^
I found this movie to be quite humorous. After the last car exploded and one person took a picture, that was the funniest part. This has a good, humorous storyline and I liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't that great. The drawings were kind of two dimensional. You could have changed camera angles atleast once to get a close up on the trck or something.

[HOT Lesbian Hentai 69]

Pretty lame

Well, not sure if you were trying to get TotW with this movie, but either way, this is a pretty crappy movie. The whole scene is shot from far away, making this void of any details, and which also allowed you to make a movie with a lot less skill in Flash. Another random violence movie (how many is this now?) with no storyline. The explosions looked really stupid and the ending scene was just a bent line, filled up, and then with a few erasers taken to it. Not very impressed at all with this.