FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A day with a cactus part2]

LOL!

^^Good Points^^
This second edition is even better than the first one! The graphics were much better, which really helped me to get into this more and enjoy it more. I liked the voice overs and of course there was a ton of humor in this movie. Very good job on this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics could still use the most improving out of anything in this movie, but I guess it kind of characterizes the movie, so your still golden man.

kingofthecactus responds:

Yeah sorry, I suck at drawing.

[A day with a cactus part1]

Funny throughout

^^Good Points^^
This movie was definitely funny to watch. The best part was the wal-mart scene. I like how you made such mean references to the people of Wal-Mart and retarted people. It was still funny though, especially when the wheel chair dude ran over the ramp. Good times here, good times.

^^Needs Improving^^
Obviously the graphics are not very good at all. Your drawings are devoid of any detail or shading, and the pictures you took were poorly cropped and low detail. There was also very poor animations.

[How To Win Portal Awards]

Hmmm...

^^Good Points^^
I really liked the introduction to this. The music was really cool, and the animations were pretty well done as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is kind of like that movie "How to write reviews", which I'm sure you remember. This really didn't shed much light on how to win awards other than the obvious, like "make it really good" is kind of a given to win the daily feature. Sorry, but this doesn't really help me too much.

Frenzy responds:

Thanks for your review, first of all!

Also, now that I think about it, I guess this would be helpful to newcomers to Newgrounds who don't really know much about the site...

Once again, thanks for reviewing, any review is appreicated!

[edgardos adventures]

Pretty good.

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty good movie. Your drawings are above average compared to most things, and the simplistic animations get your point across, yet look well done. I liked the sound effects you used. They were perfect for a beach scene. I laughed at this even though it was random violence, and I'm looking forward to watching some episodes in the future.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sure, this was short, but I still think it was a little too drawn out. It seems like you stalled in certain parts to lenghten this a bit.

[homer.swf]

lol...

^^Good Points^^
This is definitely a...unique piece. The randomness was kind of funny at points. The ending was also hilarious. It made no sense, but this was funny. I liked the sound effects and music you used as well. Funny stuff here, I think.

^^Needs Improving^^
Kind of short, I think. I would have liked to see a lot more of this random stuff. I didn't like the first part either, the music is just disturbing.

[MaCW: Something]

Heh

^^Good Points^^
I found this movie to be quite humorous. After the last car exploded and one person took a picture, that was the funniest part. This has a good, humorous storyline and I liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't that great. The drawings were kind of two dimensional. You could have changed camera angles atleast once to get a close up on the trck or something.

[HOT Lesbian Hentai 69]

Pretty lame

Well, not sure if you were trying to get TotW with this movie, but either way, this is a pretty crappy movie. The whole scene is shot from far away, making this void of any details, and which also allowed you to make a movie with a lot less skill in Flash. Another random violence movie (how many is this now?) with no storyline. The explosions looked really stupid and the ending scene was just a bent line, filled up, and then with a few erasers taken to it. Not very impressed at all with this.

[Overkill]

Another short movie...

^^Good Points^^
This is definitely better than the movie I just saw, which was also a very short, random stick violence movie. The things you did better on were: improved sound effects, mainly the ones from the characters themselves, a little more creative in the violence department, like when the one stick hit the other with his head, and just better all around.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like to see random violence stuff. You could have added a storyline and such to this or made something like your Entrapment movie. Not too bad though.

[Slide of Death]

Too short

^^Good Points^^
The blood and gore was drawn pretty well. The sound effects were a nice addition too. I think your animation and detail in this movie is a lot better than in the last movie I reviewed, but still this is very short.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seems like it should just be a scene from one of your other stick movies, but it gets its own submission. I can deal with that. But as its own movie, this has no storyline is not really funny at all, and turns out just to be random violence.