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[qwerty]

This isn't that bad.

^^Good Points^^
You said not to watch this and that it was stupid shit in your description, but I didn't think that this was too bad. The best part was how the music just blended right in, and the tone of the music was perfect. The trailer made me interested, yet didn't give away too much of the story. Don't underestimate yourself!

^^Needs Improving^^
The beginning took a little too long to start off. I thought there wasn't going to be a movie at first. The people could use some fixing in their drawings too.

[Sticklesson 1]

Kind of lame

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this movie is the graphics. Though you used stick figures, you still animted very well and drew blood well, which seems to be a tough thing to do.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is kind of lame. "Stick Lessons"...I didn't really learn anything from this. All you did was show what happens when a stupid stick gets a gun and when a smarter stick gets a gun. Not really funny, not really interesting or fun to watch.

[Don't Drink]

What the hell?

^^Good Points^^
The animations are very good in this film. Very smooth and very defined. The sound effects were pretty clear and defined as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, as you said this is kind of disgusting. Unlike your "Don't Smoke" movie, this one doesn't really do anything to persuade someone not to drink. The guy stuck a bottle in his ass and then tasted his blood. What is that supposed to do? That was pretty uncalled for.

[Don't Smoke]

Yup

^^Good Points^^
This may be a bit humorous and lighthearted in nature, but it does convey an important message, and that is that one should not smoke. This was pretty funny and kind of random at the same time. Smoking explodes your head...that's definitely a con.

^^Needs Improving^^
If you are going to go for random, it would have been better to make it completely random, like getting hit by a car or something! Now that would have been funny!

[ParoVadius: The Trailer]

This is pretty cool.

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty good trailer by my standards. You manipulated and animated your sprites very well. The beginning scene was pretty cool and pretty well done. The sound effects were good, and I'm looking forward to seeing the future episodes.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the movie is very good. This was pretty solid and I can't think of anything specific that needs improving. Well done.

[Mario n' Yoshi]

Eh...

^^Good Points^^
Nice and short, which is something that is good, especially for people who aren't too good at flash. The music was fitting atleast.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your animations were a little off. Increase the framerate and slow things down a little bit. Also, you could try to manipulate the sprites a little bit more besides just rotating them and what not. This really isn't up to par with today's standards.

[Day The Red Thingy Fell]

XD

^^Good Points^^
Though this was a pretty crappy movie graphically, it still was pretty entertaining to watch. I really laughed when the "crazy space mission" just exploded into the red thing. I liked how you made dialogue out of your short comings, like the freakishly long legs and "Why did I slide instead of walk?" line. This definitely made me laugh and I liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would say the graphics need improving, but this movie just wouldn't be the same with good graphics. I guess some dramatic voice overs would be good.

[LL - Start of A Movement]

lol...

^^Good Points^^
The whole "awareness flash" thing you had going on was pretty funny. Throughout this short movie there was a good amount of humor. The drawings weren't terrible either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This should be longer, or atleast hurry up with releasing the next episode. I would really like to see what happens next!

Review Request Club

[The Hardest Day of My Lif]

A good message atleast.

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music in this movie. It helps the sad mood in the movie. This has a good message too, and the message at the end is good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, this had pretty poor graphics. You didn't really bother to animate in three dimensions at all, and you seemed to use resizing parts of the movie to try and simulate that, which never looks too good. The graphics definitely need some improving, but other than that, this isn't bad at all.