Well drawn explosions
^^Good Points^^
It appears to me that this is 100% drawn by you. I found this very impressive. Your explosions look very cool, much better than most people can do, and the drawings of the mountain looked cool as well. Though this was just a test, I think this deserves some recognition for how well the drawings are done.
^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not a big fan of tests mainly because they are short and have no storyline, just like this one.