FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario n' Yoshi]

Eh...

^^Good Points^^
Nice and short, which is something that is good, especially for people who aren't too good at flash. The music was fitting atleast.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your animations were a little off. Increase the framerate and slow things down a little bit. Also, you could try to manipulate the sprites a little bit more besides just rotating them and what not. This really isn't up to par with today's standards.

[Day The Red Thingy Fell]

XD

^^Good Points^^
Though this was a pretty crappy movie graphically, it still was pretty entertaining to watch. I really laughed when the "crazy space mission" just exploded into the red thing. I liked how you made dialogue out of your short comings, like the freakishly long legs and "Why did I slide instead of walk?" line. This definitely made me laugh and I liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would say the graphics need improving, but this movie just wouldn't be the same with good graphics. I guess some dramatic voice overs would be good.

[LL - Start of A Movement]

lol...

^^Good Points^^
The whole "awareness flash" thing you had going on was pretty funny. Throughout this short movie there was a good amount of humor. The drawings weren't terrible either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This should be longer, or atleast hurry up with releasing the next episode. I would really like to see what happens next!

Review Request Club

[The Hardest Day of My Lif]

A good message atleast.

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music in this movie. It helps the sad mood in the movie. This has a good message too, and the message at the end is good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, this had pretty poor graphics. You didn't really bother to animate in three dimensions at all, and you seemed to use resizing parts of the movie to try and simulate that, which never looks too good. The graphics definitely need some improving, but other than that, this isn't bad at all.

[Speedball]

Well drawn explosions

^^Good Points^^
It appears to me that this is 100% drawn by you. I found this very impressive. Your explosions look very cool, much better than most people can do, and the drawings of the mountain looked cool as well. Though this was just a test, I think this deserves some recognition for how well the drawings are done.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not a big fan of tests mainly because they are short and have no storyline, just like this one.

[Chuck Norris]

I don't get this.

I don't see what the big deal about Chuck Norris is. Nothing about him is funny to me, thus I am not going to find a movie saying he is some type of demon very funny. Especially if said movie has crude drawings of bloody teeth over pictures of Chuck. It doesn't look like you spent a bunch of time preparing this movie, as you admit you didn't so expect bad reviews.

[StuntExperience]

Ouch...

^^Good Points^^
You definitely know how to animate violence, that is for sure. The animations were really smooth, and your blood flew pretty realistically and looked good. There were many different scenes to watch in this, all more gruesome than the last. The sound effects were good as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is just random violence, not really my thing.

[ClockDay 2005]

Compress the music!

^^Good Points^^
Drawings and animations were pretty good. The joke is kind of funny, and I like SBC's personality in this one. It fits him perfectly.

^^Needs Improving^^
4MB for less than thirty seconds of movie? That doesn't seem very reasonable to me. Compress your music or something. This could have been longer, but I guess it is clock day, and it wasn't bad for Clock Day. Nice job.

[Channel97]

Funny in a weird way.

^^Good Points^^
I thought the beginning was pretty funny with Mr. Rogers and all. The movie itself is kind of strange, but I still found it a little laughable. I thought the voice overs were very plain yet still sounded very funny and the words themselves were funny as hell.

^^Needs Improving^^
The credits in the beginning were extremely boring and took way too long to play. I felt like stopping the movie right there.