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[T.A.O.M.M & M.M Ep 1]

Not a bad start

^^Good Points^^
Well, I liked the graphics. You drawings weren't bad, and the fact that everything was moving atleast slightly tells me you spent some time on the graphics. I like your characters, they are unique. The voice overs were good as was the music. The storyline is kind of funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lot of your animations seem to be just simple rotations and size changes. You can't really go a lot with animating a mushroom and a marshmellow, but try for some better animations next time.

GuitarBrdArounO responds:

Thx for actually taking time in your review man. but yea i hardly had any changes... if you watch my other animations, im mostly a fbf artist, I was trying out tweening for once.... This is prolly my first tweened movie.. buy yea lol, I did the intro theme song and the intro about 6 months ago... then I finished the whole rest in one night, because I was determined to finish it