FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Winston goes for a walk]

This is ok

^^Good Points^^
Let's see, I liked the animations most in this. Your animations are very clear and very detailed. The way you lip synced was interesting and your voice overs were neat as well. The ending was funny and I liked the sound you played at that point.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how you added real-life pictures to this instead of drawing your own. It just didn't look good in this, because it looks like you just movied Winston across the screen regardless of what was in the picture.

[T.A.O.M.M & M.M Ep 1]

Not a bad start

^^Good Points^^
Well, I liked the graphics. You drawings weren't bad, and the fact that everything was moving atleast slightly tells me you spent some time on the graphics. I like your characters, they are unique. The voice overs were good as was the music. The storyline is kind of funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lot of your animations seem to be just simple rotations and size changes. You can't really go a lot with animating a mushroom and a marshmellow, but try for some better animations next time.

GuitarBrdArounO responds:

Thx for actually taking time in your review man. but yea i hardly had any changes... if you watch my other animations, im mostly a fbf artist, I was trying out tweening for once.... This is prolly my first tweened movie.. buy yea lol, I did the intro theme song and the intro about 6 months ago... then I finished the whole rest in one night, because I was determined to finish it