FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Meet Pomegranate Clock]

ok..lol

^^Good Points^^
Well, not a terrible movie. Your drawing of your new character isn't too bad. I liked how you threw that sound effect in there. It is a funny sound and was random and funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can see why this has such a low score...This is really short and there is hardly any animation at all, which is a big turn off. Next time, add more of a storyline and some more animations and you'll do fine.

[Fat Kid Plays POP!]

meh...

^^Good Points^^
Strange idea, but I guess this turned out OK. It was kind of cute and kind of entertaining as well. The drawings weren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This submission is just lacking a lot of substance. It's just a fat kid making farting noises. This isn't that great and I probably wouldn't watch something if you did it similarly to this.

stik responds:

Have a look at some of my other work. It's alot different.

[[CC] Shoe on Head.]

I need to get back to YTMND

^^Good Points^^
I found this to be quite funny even though I haven't been to YTMND in ages and I've never heard of this fad. The speakonia usage was great and the plot was funny, kind of random, but funny. Your drawings were also good. I expect to see some more good movies out of you in the future.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't do very much animating in this movie, that is my only problem.

Coke-Glock responds:

For real y'know.

[Winston goes for a walk]

This is ok

^^Good Points^^
Let's see, I liked the animations most in this. Your animations are very clear and very detailed. The way you lip synced was interesting and your voice overs were neat as well. The ending was funny and I liked the sound you played at that point.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how you added real-life pictures to this instead of drawing your own. It just didn't look good in this, because it looks like you just movied Winston across the screen regardless of what was in the picture.