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[Jim: The Movie (Trailer)]

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^^Good Points^^
I was thinking that the voices were new in this, and after reading your comments, that was confirmed. I thought the voices really made this more interesting than the rest of the series overall. Definitely well done voice overs and the storyline looks to be quite interesting. Even if you don't ever make a real movie out of this, it will be interesting to watch the series with voices.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, you won't be making a full version of this one, which is what I was hoping from a trailer.

Jimtopia responds:

Although the voices are good, they added about a month to the production time, from the time where I put the "ad" for them out, to the time I completed the cartoon; and seeing how this cartoon did worse than my previous Jim and Pals Shorts, I don't think I'll be sticking with voices, unless it's a rare occasion. Thx for the review.

[News Reporter II]

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^^Good Points^^
Well I think that the third episode might be interesting, seeing how News Reporter won't be in the office anymore reporting the news. It will be interesting to see what you think of next for this series.

^^Needs Improving^^
Didn't really liked the first episode, and this one was nothing great either. I didn't think it was really that funny, but it wasn't all that bad. A few minor jokes were funny, but that's about it.

kinggila responds:

Actually, he'll be back to normal on the third episode. As I said to another review, it's like Itchy & Scratchy and Kenny from South Park. They'll be back to life on the episode after they get killed.

[Invasion from THE VOID]

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^^Good Points^^
The storyline of this was pretty good. There were lots of characters and a decent graphics as well. I liked the music too, that was a cool tune.

^^Needs Improving^^
One thing, there was no sound effects at all throughout this whole movie, and there definitely should have been. Also, the music cut off half way through, and then the rest of the movie was silent, that was boring. One more thing is that this was very laggy for some reason. Possibly needs some optimization.

[Leek Enigma]

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^^Good Points^^
This was quite good. Very strange though. I like how leek clock's face freaked out. Anyway, really not much else to say. I liked it!

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, err. I really can't say much to improve upon. It's not a great movie, but I guess I'm just confused a bit right now.

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[PatriotClock is Lazy]

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^^Good Points^^
Ah, another person that got lazy prior to clock day. Not a bad product however. I liked the facial expressions of the two. Completely different...

^^Needs Improving^^
Laziness obviously has its downsides as well. Obviously, there really isn't much to look at here. Just a loop and then B. Would have liked to see more of a movie from you.

[LL - PeachLock vs SBC]

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^^Good Points^^
A great Clock Day submission. The graphics were no less than I have come to expect from you, wonchop. Excellent animations and good drawings as well. The ending was definitely unexpected, which I always find to be a good characteristic of a movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really not a lot I can say to improve upon. It's rather short, but you did was you wanted to do with this.

[Sbc JACKS OFF ahahahahaha]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, I guess I got what I was promised in the title. I liked SBC's facial expression, but other than that there really isn't much to admire.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not very interesting if you ask me. Nothing here is really that impressive. Just the same looping animation over and over. I think you animated this about as well as you could, but more needs to happen.

TheSoulMan responds:

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[SBC needs Milk]

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^^Good Points^^
This movie was quite enjoyable. Having the movie based in egypt was quite interesting, and the "Spinning bitch" made me laugh. Good sound effects as well. I liked the one from MGS.

^^Needs Improving^^
A bit short I think. Doesn't look like it was quite finished when you submitted it. Definitely continue it next year!

[Slice of Wisdom 2]

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^^Good Points^^
Hehe, great stuff here. The preloader was quite cool, since the photoshopping was very good, as always from BBQ. Music was pretty epic, and I really have a thing for clock movies with crappy graphics.

^^Needs Improving^^
It would have been funnier if you had rotated SBC four times rather than three. Then his clock hands would have formed a swastika. They almost do, but it's just not there. Anyway, this would have been better if the fight wasn't so repetitive. It was funny for the first few seconds, but then it god old.

[CC - SBC's Adventure]

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^^Good Points^^
I thought this was quite good. You put good effort into this. I liked the spoofing of The OC with the music and animations. Definitely loved how you animated Wade and Tom. Also, the backgrounds were interesting. Good job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Only thing would be the filesize. Probably comes from unoptimized audio. Could have definitely been below 1MB.