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^^Good Points^^
I was thinking that the voices were new in this, and after reading your comments, that was confirmed. I thought the voices really made this more interesting than the rest of the series overall. Definitely well done voice overs and the storyline looks to be quite interesting. Even if you don't ever make a real movie out of this, it will be interesting to watch the series with voices.
^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, you won't be making a full version of this one, which is what I was hoping from a trailer.