FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Smucker's Moment]

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^^Good Points^^
As far as one-joked, short, jelly related movies go, I guess this is about as good as it gets. The voicing was done pretty well, they all sounded realistic to me. Graphics were pretty good as well. The anime style didn't hurt this at all.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly I thought you could have done a little bit more with the joke setup. It's basically just the commercial with a harsher way of handing him a future than the commercial.

Skaijo responds:

I like the structure of this review. It makes it easier for me to pinpoint which details I need to work on.

You make some good points and your write in a very clear way. You're suggestion for improvement is also original and supported. This is a great review, title or not.

10/10

[TwistClock's Great Escape]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This was a very interesting movie. It was kind of bizarre, and I'm not quite sure exactly what was going on in this, but it was still quite fun to watch. Really nothing much else to say...good enough to get an 8 out of 10.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seemed to end quite abruptly to me, though the joke at the end was a good way to go out on this one.

[The Writers Strike on NG]

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^^Good Points^^
Hello again my friend. Not sure I really agree with your opinions on this, but still a pretty good movie nonetheless. I thought it was pretty funny how you sort of portrayed the network execs who control pay as commie Russians. A pretty funny twist if you ask me.

^^Needs Improving^^
Too short. Put some more time into your movies and make them longer :P

IZSBHR responds:

I actually put more than the average amount of time I put into short flashes on this, this took 2 or 3 days.

[Nathonia]

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^^Good Points^^
Best movie I've seen in a while. The first thing that I liked was the narration. A very clear and confident voice gave you all the information about this country and kept me interested. The jokes were great. Pretty much every single one made me laugh, especially the people stacking and the civil war was funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Got kind of boring during the Q&A section of this, though the sock puppets were a good idea.

[DD4 at the Dock Division]

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^^Good Points^^
A quick effort on Daily Day, but a pretty good tribute to the group and a good Flash movie to add to your name. The joke wasn't so funny, but I think the garble mess of words snarf was saying during his seizure was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just that it is quite short, but you only had a few hours to do this, and for the length the quality isn't bad at all.

[Doc Ock]

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^^Good Points^^
Hehe, that was some great stuff. You really used some good video editing and some good voice acting to make a strange series of events, but they were all pretty comical. I think the quality of the jokes was pretty high, and most people could enjoy watching what you've done here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...I wonder how much of this was actually done in Flash.

[Friday the 14th]

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^^Good Points^^
Well I guess an ok joke, though it wasn't really that funny, just kind of witty. I was surprised to see a furry sitting on the couch though.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unlike a comic, which this came from, this really needs some audio to go along with it. Without audio it seems very bland and doesn't really keep the viewer interested in what is going on.