FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[We Sure Love Clocks!]

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^^Good Points^^
Heh, not sure if this was for or against the CC, but I still found it's mocking ways to be kind of funny. I think just about every part had it's good points that made me laugh. They were all really short, so I guess at least there were no really long tweens or pointless animations in this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really liking the menu. I think you should have made the buttons more than just the text. Stuff like that always annoys me.

[Axe in a gay bar]

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^^Good Points^^
Hehe, this was pretty funny. It's a good spoof of the Axe. I liked how you put "ass" instead of "Axe" on the bottle. Also liked the facial expressions and the animations as well. One of the better short CD submissions.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I didn't like was how quickly the text went away at the end. I only got time to read about half of it before it went back to the preloader.

[Numbah 50!!!!!!!]

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^^Good Points^^
Well congrats on fifty submissions for the Dock Division. Definitely one of the more enjoyable small groups here on NG. The music in this was really cool, what's the band and song? Also, these pixelated characters always make me laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
A bit short for my tastes. Though I guess it's better than making a STORYLINE about making fifty flashes. God that would be boring.

Imacowdock responds:

Strange Desease-Prozzak

"Though I guess it's better than making a STORYLINE about making fifty flashes. God that would be boring."

I know, I don't understand what Irken is yaking about.

[StrawberryClock is BLAZIN]

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^^Good Points^^
I liked this submission. The graphics were pretty good looking, with the moving outlines and facial expressions. The ending was pretty humorous as well, and the music was pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
What was with the IM sounds in the background? Were they supposed to be there? Also, could have been a lot more done with SBC smoking weed, com on!

[Jim: The Movie (Trailer)]

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^^Good Points^^
I was thinking that the voices were new in this, and after reading your comments, that was confirmed. I thought the voices really made this more interesting than the rest of the series overall. Definitely well done voice overs and the storyline looks to be quite interesting. Even if you don't ever make a real movie out of this, it will be interesting to watch the series with voices.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, you won't be making a full version of this one, which is what I was hoping from a trailer.

Jimtopia responds:

Although the voices are good, they added about a month to the production time, from the time where I put the "ad" for them out, to the time I completed the cartoon; and seeing how this cartoon did worse than my previous Jim and Pals Shorts, I don't think I'll be sticking with voices, unless it's a rare occasion. Thx for the review.