FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CD07: Clockcrew Outtakes]

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^^Good Points^^
Very good movie here. I thought you did a good job organizing this, with some of the stronger parts towards the beginning. Really liked the 3 stooges one. That was quite comical. Decent graphics and a funny collection of sound clips.

^^Needs Improving^^
Only thing I didn't get was the one with the clock that looked like it had black hair with a giant spike in the top. What the heck was that supposed to be?

fadedshadow responds:

alfalfa clock

[646 x 501]

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^^Good Points^^
Awesome movie. The beginning had cool graphics, looked like a painting or something. The game part's graphics were almost scary looking they were so detailed. The ending was awesome as well. It made no sense. I watched it for about five minutes before I got bored.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like the music, but that's just a minor thing.

[cc - ultamite food thief]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, it was a good effort. I liked the music and the randomness of this whole thing was kind of comical.

^^Needs Improving^^
Work on making your animations make some sense. All of these animations were kind of quick and it was hard to tell what was going on. The graphics were kind of low quality, like they were imported JPEG's or something. Also, maybe some backgrounds would make this more interesting.

aListers responds:

yeah! I'm not good at making things make sense! see! yeah! they wer imported JPGs and BMPs! And also I was a noob at the time making this flash so I didn't make a background!

[CLOCKGAY Collab #2]

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^^Good Points^^
Decent clock day collab. I thought it was pretty creative. The menu with StrawberryClock shaped like a penis and a good layout. Decent collab parts, though nothing spectacular.

^^Needs Improving^^
The parts of this were a little boring. Two of them were a single frame, and the other one was a really long tween. Not that interesting.

Little-Radiodemon responds:

Well we did make three of these collabs so ideas where streched and it was only planned a week before Clock Day I think, lol. But thanks for the review.

[TANKMEN 1.5]

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^^Good Points^^
Uhh...well the graphics were pretty good. Good animations and some decent sound effects made this more interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really relies on two main jokes. The whole sex talk and "Not anymore bitch". Honestly, didn't really think much of this was good at all. Jokes were a little lame. Didn't laugh once. Not my type of humor at all.

[Slash's Clock Day 1.66]

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^^Good Points^^
Heh, as soon as the Speakonia came on, I knew this would be funny. That was truly a bunch of great Speakonia sounds. Anyway, the conversations were rather funny, as they were rambling and didn't make a lot of sense. Also liked the facial expressions. They were great.

^^Needs Improving^^
The masturbation scene was a bit long and drawn out. The music went well with it though.

SlashFirestorm responds:

Masturbating being TOO long? BLASPHEMY

[Intelligent Conversations]

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^^Good Points^^
Heh, I kind of like Rupee, but this was still quite good. Makes fun of his profile very well in this conversation. I liked the jokes and the drawings were pretty good as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, first thing I thought was weird. It seemed to be lagging, but turning down the quality didn't do it, so I assume must have made it just look weird or something. Anyway, it's cool. Only other thing that I didn't like was that a few times I couldn't hear SherClock's voice.

[CC - Random Violence!]

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^^Good Points^^
It was pretty good. Better than most "last minute" clock day flashes that people submit. I though the part with Albino was quite well done, even though the explosion sound effect was really too loud.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, explosion was too loud, kind of didn't sound that great coming out of my speakers.

Tails-Lock responds:

Maybe it's your speakers? It didn't sound too bad on my pc. But, the quality of it was reduced a bit. thanks!

[Clocken Boo]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, that was interesting. I guess it was kind of enjoyable, since it was quite unexpected. I thought it was kind of funny when Rupee got shot, though that didn't make much sense.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really, nothing made much sense at all. What the hell was that chicken doing there? Work on the animations as well, they were a little low quality.

[Frax's World Clock Day]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, a happy clock day to you too!

^^Needs Improving^^
Kind of boring. It's a nice way of saying "Happy Clock Day!", but it really isn't the best. It's pretty boring, since it's just one frame with some barely animated characters. Really needs a storyline or something to go with it.