FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Guilt Wears a Moustache]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, it started off not so bad. There were some good drawings of all the different clocks, and also this man clock. Who was he by the way?

^^Needs Improving^^
Arg, so boring. You just switched between one scene and another, which were the exact same thing each time. Very boring if you ask me. Needed some different animations in there and perhaps a shorter amount of talking. I had no idea what was going on I was so bored.

[i am envelopeclock]

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^^Good Points^^
Hmm... I am trying to think of something to put here. I guess you kept with your reputation of poor movies with this.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would have at least liked to see a drawing of Envelopeclock or something. At the very least a picture, but really animation is needed for this movie. Some kind of introduction besides just text declaring your name would be nice.

StagBeetle responds:

Review Score: 10 / 10
Oh.

[Caramel&Coal: To ClockDay]

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^^Good Points^^
A great tale of how Coal and CaramelApple journey to NG city to celebrate clock day. There was a lot of humor throughout. It's always amazing to me how all of the clocks have a great sense of humor but still keep everything fresh and comical. Great graphics and a great storyline. Also, very nice use of O Fortuna and Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I noticed, which was very minor, was that sometimes the subtitles were cut off on the sides.

[PineappleClocks Abduction]

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^^Good Points^^
I thought this was quite good. The graphics were pretty sloppy, but I liked the style that you brought in this. I really liked the way this was being told like a story by that black circle clock. There was a lot of humor in this, especially the ending. Great stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, really nothing much. Just wondering, who was that clock that was telling the story.

DWARFINATORclock responds:

Blackmagic was telling the story.

[In the Army]

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Well sir, I appreciate that at least one person decided to celebrate the day on NG. I haven't seen any other veterans day movies here, so I give you points for that. The animations were smooth and the coloring made it look like an old war movie or something. Nice job.

IZSBHR responds:

Really? Awesome!

[Final Fantasy: Hobo Clock]

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^^Good Points^^
I really love the filesize. Most people on Clock Day don't bother to optimize audio and graphics, so good job. Interesting storyline. Not sure that I really like it, but it was a good effort.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm a bit confused here. Where did pineapple go? And how were they able to attack him if he teleported away. Didn't make much sense to me.

[DartClock In: Story Time!]

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^^Good Points^^
You look like you have some drawing skill. DartClock looked pretty well drawn and was quite detailed. Dragonforce music...not bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
Eww...I had to wait 7mb of loading for a loop of dart clock spinning? This is quite disappointing if you ask me. If you aren't going to make a storyline in a movie, at least make sure it doesn't take a long time to load.

BinaryGuy responds:

Noted, next time i make a NG holiday submission on the day of the event, I'll make sure it loads in 10 seconds on Dial-up access.

first ig otta find some dial-up access to test with... I will start the search now!
did you see Episode 2 yet?

[CC - Stickers]

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^^Good Points^^
Looks like a promising series. The idea of them getting in trouble for tagging up an entire city is unique, and I think it will make for an interesting sequel. Graphics were cool. I liked DearyClock's sketched body. By the way, what was he supposed to be? A sock?

^^Needs Improving^^
In some parts the graphics seemed a little rushed. The scene with BananaClock doing the news looked pretty poorly drawn.

M4KBOT responds:

thanks, I guess I am a sock. Some parts were made the night before Clock Day so I didn't have much time add too much detail. You can expect the nest episode on Clock Day 08, I suppose =D

[Tomas et la Fraise]

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^^Good Points^^
That was a very interesting movie. I was trying to predict what would happen throughout, but I never got it right. Very unpredictable and enjoyable. The graphics were very smooth. Can't believe you haven't made many other movies. I'm sure they would be successful.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really not a whole lot. I was wondering what the hell this had to do with clocks for most of the time.

Munglai responds:

g g g g
I've made quite a lot of movies they're just all old and lame and on an old, lame account which I keep secret. I'm still making stuff now, I just don't submit them here anymore. I'm trying to move away from Flash because it's a really awkward program to do proper animation in.

[SBC's Stayin Alive]

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^^Good Points^^
It was a pretty good loop. I liked the spinning background, and SBC was pretty well animated in his dancing. Music was pretty awesome as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I expected the music, but I didn't expect a really short loop. I guess it was the filesize that got me. You should definitely try to optimize the audio a bit to scale down that filesize. Kind of a lot to have to load for a loop.