FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Kinda Love Story]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was really quite funny, you have some great Flash skills! I actually thought the graphics were pretty unique. "voice overs by noobking" made me laugh when I saw it was speakonia. Great storyline and minigame, and the picture of drew pickles was hilarious. Great job on this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some scenes were a little drawn out like the drew pickles scene.

TheSoulMan responds:

Noobking made the "OMG SUPERAWESOME MINIGAME" thingy :P

[fighting?]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphical effects were well done in this. You seem to know your way around Flash well enough to make a decent movie. Sound effects were pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Effects were good, but the drawings and animations really weren't that good, which is what really brings this down. This has nothing to do with the clock crew, and there was no storyline added into this either.

HoboPorn responds:

Yeah I am working on the drawings...even if they are sticks LOL. But my clock movies are way better then this shit I have the clock day preloader because it is somthing I made and no one else did so I put it in so somthing in this movie would be decent.

[Solid Snake/Meryl Sex XXX]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not the worst submission I've seen. It was really quite funny to see fat badger in his espianoge suit and hiding in a box. Music was good, and the graphics and animations were decent as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
No really storyline in this, I was expecting porn, but of course that will get you some bad feedback. Could be longer too.

FatBadger responds:

what espionage suit!?!?! his headband??

[The 120 fps collab]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the introduction and the menus in this collab. I also like the idea, of having humorous animations done at an incredible rate. Pretty good animations throughout this, and kind of creative.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, I have seen collabs with high FPS's but this one doesn't stand out as one of the better ones. There really wasn't any fun subliminal messages or really quick animations, which is what I was looking for.

[Windows Collab]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the menu setup. Looks just like windows, which is pretty cool. I thought that the sound effects were good, and the storyline's in each part were good, and had some humor.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics looked rushed in both parts of this collab.

Little-Rena responds:

Graphics in mine wheren't too good because I can't draw good. :S

[RR - Mini Collab 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like how this time you made a menu and divided this up into sections, that is what I hoped for when I saw the first one.

^^Needs Improving^^
This just seems lacking compared to the first. Again, the animations are very lame, mostly tweens and not much detail put into the animations, and I noticed this time the graphics seemed very rushed, unlike the first. Sound quality was low in some spots too.

Review Request Club

[RR - Mini Collab]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, decent start out for a new Crew type deal. The drawings throughout were pretty well done, and the storylines in each part were generally pretty funny. From watching this, so far I have nothing against this new group, the Rock Rebellion.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really much along the lines of animation in this movie. Basically just tweens and movie clips, nothing that great. Would have been better set up like a traditional collab with a menu and sections though.

[Nemo, Finding Him]

K

^^Good Points^^
I saw GrayClock listed in P-Bots post and knew I had to check this out. I was definitely pleasantly surprised at how funny this was. I found the drawings of Nemo to be hilarious, and the ending with him sitting with a bunch of dead fish made me laugh. Supreme work!

^^Needs Improving^^
I think that the voice overs were a bit hard to hear over the bubbling sound of the ocean.

[P2Porn]

K

^^Good Points^^
Overall, I think this is a very good movie. The graphics in this were very unique. A lot of shading and the camera angles were constantly changing. Good animations and good voice overs. Thought the whole process of getting porn was pretty humorous as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Loud screaming voice overs were pretty crappy sounding. Lots of interference and weird noises.

[TANKMEN: Target Practice]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very worthy flash to be included in the Tankmen section of NG. I really liked the voice over, especially the guy in the tank. The tank flipping was pretty funny, and adding Bill Cosby into this just made it that much funnier. I laughed at this, good movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit short. I think you could have added a bunch more into this and made it longer.

fadedshadow responds:

well yeah it could have been longer, perhaps if i make a sequel...